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Formal letter Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in regard to the start of working as a software engineer in your company on November 15. I regret to inform you that I can embark only on November 17. Let me explain my situation in more detail. My current boss asked me to finish an urgent international project. Only I collaborated with that company and know all the details of the agreement. I understand how crucial is starting to work at the right time and, therefore, I worry about your attitude to this situation. But nevertheless, I am aware of the good relations to job and colleagues even if they are former too. I would like to offer my sincere apologies for any inconvenience which I had caused for your company. Please, allow me to suggest to work during the first weekend. I believe that I will do all the work what I must to do in time. I hope that this change will not cause you too much. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Victoria

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Formal letter

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you in regards to the my starting date of working as a software engineer in(for?)  your company on November 15. I regret to inform you that Unfortunately, I can embark only on will not be able to begin until November 17.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. I would leave this sentence out, and just continue the previous paragraph with the following sentence.  My current boss asked me to finish an urgent international project. Only I am the only person who collaborated with that company and knows all the details of the agreement. It is not clear which company you have collaborated with. Did you mean: No one else at the company knows the details of the agreement? 
I understand how crucial is starting to work at the right time and, therefore, I worry am concerned (in formal situation, the word concerned is generally more appropriate than worried) about your attitude to this situation. But Nevertheless, I am aware of the good relations to job and colleagues even if they are former too. care about my current project, and I would like to keep a good relationship with my co–workers.
I would like to offer Please, accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience which I had caused for toyour company.
Please, allow me to suggest to work during the first weekend. I believe that I will do all the work what I must to do in time. I hope that this change will not cause you too much.  If possible, I would like to be able to work over the first weekend (exact dates here), so then I am going to complete the work for the missing dates (exact dates for the missing time).
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully truly,
Victoria

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