An informal email.
Hi, Anna,
Glad to hear, that you're feeling better now. Don't worry about your studies, health is more important, anyway.
I'm fine, so as my family, thanks. I haven't been doing anything exiting recently. Just work, putting the numbers in computer the most :) That's great, that your brother is enjoying his new job, I wish him good luck with it.
I'm happy, that you're going to our town! You could stay in my house, it is not far from the University. Of course I'll show you all around! It will be pleasure to me.
Please, send me the pictures you promised.
Take care,
Jane.
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An informal email.
Hi, Anna,Glad to hear, [delete comma] that you're feeling better now. Don't worry about your studies, your health is more important.
I'm fine, as is my family, thanks. I haven't been doing anything exciting recently. Just work, inputting the numbers in the computer mostly :) That's great, [delete comma] that your brother is enjoying his new job, I wish him good luck with it.
I'm happy, [delete comma] to hear that you're coming to our town! You could stay at my house, it's not far from the University. Of course I'll show you all around! It would be my pleasure.
Please, send me the pictures you promised.
Take care,
Jane.
Great job! I just changed a few things to make it sound more natural. Just to explain some of the changes: "exiting" means 'to leave', while "exciting" means 'to be something to look forward to'. English doesn't use a lot of commas (this thing: , ), especially before words like 'that' etc. I hope this feedback is useful to you!
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