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Short Thoughts In My Mind During Today 1. Playing League Of Legends is much better while it's shining. In fact, Playing League of Legends is cool in any weather. (I especially want this to be corrected) 2. Today the building supervisor turned off that effing code of the doorstation. How did it interfere him? Despite he didn't do that for being such a mean man — I'm sure he isn't —, I'd prefer not to shake his hand any longer, because he made my job a bit more complicated. 3. Sometimes I find speaking English much harder than writing, listening or other activities. I feel that the speaking skill is pretty weak, whereas I formulate thoughts in my mind faster. What a paradox.

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Short Thoughts In My Mind During Today

1. Playing League of Legends is much better while it's shining sunny. In fact, But playing League of Legends is still cool in any regardless of the weather. (I especially want this to be corrected)

2. Today the building supervisor turned off that effing code of at the doorstation. How did it interfere with him? Despite He didn't do that for being because he is such a mean man — I'm sure he isn't. I'd prefer not to shake his hand any longer, because he made my job a bit more complicated.

3. Sometimes I find speaking English much harder than writing, listening or other activities. I feel that the my speaking skill is pretty weak, whereas I formulate thoughts in my mind faster. What a paradox.

Some notes: I took some literary liberties with number 1. I think I got what you were trying to say. If you want to keep with your original wording you can still say "...playing League of Legends is cool in any weather." and that would also be correct. 

Be careful with using the word effing in number 2. It is not a literal swear word, but could be offensive depending on the situation and who you are talking with. A non-offensive substitute word could be "annoying" (I'm assuming turning off a "code" is turning off an alarm at the doorstation)

I'm not sure if I got the meaning right with your sentence "Despite he didn't do that for being such a mean man.." Did you mean he didn't turn of the code because he is mean, but he did it for some other reason? Maybe more context would help me understand it. 

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