working in a group or individually?
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For me, working in a group may be a better choice for the following reasons.
First, the assignments can be done more efficiently. Because the work will be assigned partially to different members. Every member can simply finish their part to get the work done. Thus a lot of time can be saved.
In addition, we can learn mutually with our teammates. We may get new ideas when we stuck. It’s fascinating to find out different thoughts about a same subjects. and also we can get help from the ones who are more experienced than us. Thus, achieve better.
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working in a group or individually?
[a writing practice]For me, working in a group may be a better choice for the following reasons.
First, the assignments can be done more efficiently, because the work is apportioned out to different members. Every member can simply finish their part to get the work done. Thus. a lot of time can be saved.
In addition, we/teammates can learn from each other. We may get new ideas when we are stuck. It’s fascinating to hear different thoughts about the same subject, and we can get help from the ones who are more experienced than us. Thus, we get better results.
'Assigned partially' isn't correct; you can say 'apportioned out' or more 口語 is to say 'divided up among different members'
mutually - you're probably directly translating 互相學習 but it's more 口語 to say
Thus, achieve better. - do you mean 結果更好? You could also say 'Thus, we achieve more together'
Well written, clear logic and your vocabulary is great as well!
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working in a group or individually?
[a writing practice]For me, working in a group may be a better choice for the following reasons.
First, the assignments can be done more efficiently because the work will be is assigned partially to different members. Every member can simply finish their part to get the work done. Thus a lot of time can be saved.
In addition, we can learn mutually with our teammates. We may get new ideas when we are/get stuck. It’s fascinating to find out different thoughts about a the same subjects. and also we can get help from the ones those who are more experienced than us and, thus, achieve better.
The word "thus" is used correctly here but it's not used very much casually. In both of the places you've used it here it would be fine to just leave it out completely. Good work though
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