Corrections · 3
"The zoo has no useful purposes"
"The zoo is not a the right place to make people more sympathetic with animals. ""One of the most dramatic cases that I watched on "YouTube " was about a child who inadvertently fell out of his mother's hand into the gorilla cage of gorilla. At the first moment, the gorilla held him softly and was trying to settle him down,"
Notes:
- hold (present tense) = held (past tense)
- to settle down = to calm down
"So, she started to play with him as she is used to do normally does with her babies by holding one of his feet and dragging him around."
Note: the plural form of a noun is used when preceded by "number + of", even if the number is "one".
- two of my fingers
- one of my ideas
- eight of her teeth
- one of her songs
"Anyway, it was a final choice made by her. For protecting the kid, the keeper had to shoot her. So it's not so funny to put the life of animals at risk of due to irresponsible, reckless and curious people."
"Some argue that the zoo gives the best way for education because it provides vivid information about the behavior of animals. However, the zoo doesn't isn't like jungles and forests. Then Thus,, this unnatural environment may lead to artificial responses. Moreover, technology provides us with another creative ways which are better than the zoo like 3D documentary movies."
Note: "another" is used with singular nouns. "other" is used with plural nouns.
- another idea / other ideas
- another dog / other dogs
- another game / other games
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