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Zoo has no useful purposes Zoo is not a right place to make people more sympathetic with animals. Conversely, it may send an indirect negative message to our future generation about how they should treat these creatures as if they are created for being under human control. Animals should naturally and freely grow up in the environment in which they are born. One of the most dramatic cases that I watched on "YouTube " was about a child who inadvertently fell out of his mother's hand into the cage of gorilla. At the first moment, the gorilla hold him softly and was trying to settle him, but he kept crying. So, she started to play with him as she is used to do with her babies by holding one of his foot and dragging him around. Anyway, it was a final choice made by her. For protecting the kid, the keeper had to shout her. So it's not so funny to put the life of animals at risk of irresponsible, reckless and curious people. Some argue that zoo gives the best way for education because it provides vivid information about the behavior of animals. However, zoo doesn't like jungles and forests. Then, this unnatural environment may lead to artificial responses. Moreover, technology provides us with another creative ways which are better than zoo like 3D documentary movies.

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"The zoo has no useful purposes"

"The zoo is not a the right place to make people more sympathetic with animals. "



"One of the most dramatic cases that I watched on "YouTube " was about a child who inadvertently fell out of his mother's hand into the gorilla cage of gorilla. At the first moment, the gorilla held him softly and was trying to settle him down,"

Notes:

- hold (present tense) = held (past tense)

- to settle down = to calm down


"So, she started to play with him as she is used to do normally does with her babies by holding one of his feet and dragging him around."

Note: the plural form of a noun is used when preceded by "number + of", even if the number is "one".

- two of my fingers

- one of my ideas

- eight of her teeth

- one of her songs


"Anyway, it was a final choice made by her. For protecting the kid, the keeper had to shoot her. So it's not so funny to put the life of animals at risk of due to irresponsible, reckless and curious people."


"Some argue that the zoo gives the best way for education because it provides vivid information about the behavior of animals. However, the zoo doesn't isn't like jungles and forests. Then Thus,, this unnatural environment may lead to artificial responses. Moreover, technology provides us with another creative ways which are better than the zoo like 3D documentary movies."


Note: "another" is used with singular nouns. "other" is used with plural nouns.

- another idea / other ideas

- another dog / other dogs

- another game / other games

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I definitely agree with you. Zoos are not jungles, or any natural wild habitat, and therefore animals in zoos do not behave like they would in the wild. Plus, to really understand how an animal lives, one must observe the animal for years in its natural habitat. Not a 5 minute viewing of the animal in a cage. Marketing zoos as "educational" has been a way to deflect the ethical concerns people have about their existence. Zoos exist to provide entertainment, and always have.

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