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This sentence is fine but made me a little bit confused when I first saw it. Because “尝试” can also represent 'manage to' sometimes. So maybe “尝试参加了五次高考” could be better.
很多父母们都尝试教育自己的孩子们别说谎。
勇老师告诉学生们,如果你在这次考试中第一次失败
为了买一张车票,他
他正好有零钱买一张车票
究竟谁来参加礼拜六的派对?
由于一次很严重的
我丢失了我的钥匙。麻烦您帮我寻找一下可以吗?
It's better to ask, instead of commanding.
一篇用汉语练习造句的文章 二零一九年一月二十二日 第三个
尝试 Chángshì to attempt; try说谎 Shuōhuǎng to lie
烦恼 Fánnǎo to be vexed; worried
正好 Zhènghǎo just in time; Just right; just enough; happen to; chance to; as dubious dubious happens
究竟 Jiūjìng outcome; what actually happened; used in a question to press for an exact answer; actually; exactly; after all; in the end
联系 Liánxì contact; touch; connection; to arrange; integrate
丢失 Diūshī to lose.
宋先生在过去十年内尝试过
Sòng xiānshēng zài guòqù shí nián nèi chángshì tōngguò gāokǎo wǔ cì.
很多父母们都尝试教育自己的孩子们别说谎。
Hěn duō fùmǔmen dōu chángshì jiàoyù zìjǐ de háizimen bié shuōhuǎng.
勇老师告诉学生们,如果你
Yǒng lǎoshī gàosu xuéshēngmen, rúguǒ nǐ dì yī cì shībài zhè cì kǎoshì de huà, jìu bié fánnǎo ba. Nǐ kěyǐ zài jiānglái chóngxìn kǎoshì.
为了买一张车票,他
Wèi le mǎi yī zhǎng chēpiào, tā yǒu zhènghǎo de língqián.
究竟会有谁来参加礼拜六的派对?
Jīujìng shéi lái cānjiā lǐbài de pàiduì?
由于一次很
Yóuyú yī cì hěn yánzhōng de zhēnglùn, wǒ liǎng nián qián yǔ wǒ de jiějie shīdiào liánxì.
Wǒ dīushī wǒ de yàoshi. Máfan bāng wǒ xúnzháo ba.
一篇用汉语练习造句的文章 二零一九年一月二十二日 第三个
尝试 Chángshì to attempt; try说谎 Shuōhuǎng to lie
烦恼 Fánnǎo to be vexed; worried
正好 Zhènghǎo just in time; Just right; just enough; happen to; chance to; as dubious dubious happens
究竟 Jiūjìng outcome; what actually happened; used in a question to press for an exact answer; actually; exactly; after all; in the end
联系 Liánxì contact; touch; connection; to arrange; integrate
丢失 Diūshī to lose.
宋先生在过去十年内曾五次尝试通过高考。
Sòng xiānshēng zài guòqù shí nián nèi céng wǔcì chángshì tōngguò gāokǎo .
(Wow, it's better to use "曾” before the verbs "尝试” ,to emphasize the past tense, like the English expression "someone usted to do ..." )
很多父母们都尝试教育自己孩子们别说谎。
Hěn duō fùmǔmen dōu chángshì jiàoyù zìjǐ de háizimen bié shuōhuǎng.
(Great!)
勇老师告诉学生们,如果他们在这第一次考试就失败了的话,(那)就别烦恼了。可以再重新考一次。
Yǒng lǎoshī gàosu xuéshēngmen, rúguǒ tāmen zài zhènǐ dì yī cì kǎoshì jiù shībàile de huà, nà jìu bié fánnǎo le. Nǐ kěyǐ zài chóngxìn kǎo yicì.
(I guess you wanted to say "if they fail in this first exam", so I changed the orden of these words. If you don't use quotation marks,it's necessary to use the third-person. )
为了买一张车票,他有正好的零钱。
(他的零钱正好买一张车票)
Wèi le mǎi yī zhǎng chēpiào, tā yǒu zhènghǎo de língqián.
Tā de língqián zhènghǎo mǎi yī zhāng chēpiào.
(I think"正好” is a adverbs of degree instead of a adjective, to explain that the money he has is just enough to pay the ticket.)
究竟谁会来参加礼拜六的派对?
Jīujìng shéi hùi lái cānjiā lǐbài de pàiduì?
(The party will be hold in the Saturday, so it hasn't happened yet. In the Chinese grammar we tend to use the “会” to indicate the future tense, like the auxiliary verb "will" in English.)
由于一次很严重(激烈)的争论,我两年前与我的姐姐失掉了联系。
Yóuyú yī cì hěn jīliè de zhēnglùn, wǒ liǎng nián qián yǔ wǒ de jiějie shīdiào le liánxì.
("严重” is not the appropriate adjective to modify this noun “争论”,“激烈”is more suitable)
我丢失了我的钥匙。麻烦帮我找找吧。
Wǒ dīushī wǒ de yàoshi. Máfan bāng wǒ zháozhǎo ba.
(The "了” can be added after the verb to indicate the past tense. And in the oral speaking, "找找” is more colloquial. )
great job!! 加油^^
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