Typical Tuesday night
I worked from 9A.M. to 5:30P.M. yesterday.
I cooked a pasta for dinner. After that,I read aloud the textbook in English.
Then I took a bath to get my body warm.I refreshed myself with a hot bath.
Are these sentences correct?
Thanks.
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恵子さん、
All of your sentences are correct. In my "corrections" I am making it flow more naturally in English. Explanations are included at the end.
A Typical Tuesday night *
I worked from 9A.M. to 5:30P.M. yesterday.I cooked a pasta for dinner. After that, I read aloud the from my English textbook in English.**
Then I took a bath to get warm up my body*** warm.I felt refreshed myself with a from the hot bath.
Are these sentences correct?
Thanks.
* I added the article "A" to the title.
** A space was added after "After that," and before "I read . . . " . The phrase "I read aloud from my English textbook" is very natural English.
*** "to get my body warm" is too clinical (ちょっと非人間的です）but "to warm up my body" is more natural, and expresses feeling (気持ちです）
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