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what is happiness What makes me really happy? This is a difficult question… Happiness is so a relative concept that changes for everyone. Someone is happy doing amazing things, others staying with their family, others travelling and others eating sweets. For me is a little different. Let’s start talking about the lack of money. When you don’t have money, everything is more complicated. If you live in a country in war is much more difficult. As a child I had a dream: to live in my town, to degree at university, to find a job and to create my own family, with my parents thant would have taken care of my future children. Then arrived the war. Someone decided that ours and my dreams were not so important and that happiness was not for us. I searched happiness in a boat through the sea, only me and my brother… but the boat never arrived at destination. If you had asked me, what would you have wanted to be happy? I would have reached that new land, where I could to begin again my life, to gather my family and restart to dream. But I’m now in the deep sea without hope and any miracle to waiting for. Now, for me, happiness it would have been to have another life.

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what is happiness

What makes me really happy? This is a difficult question…

Happiness is so/such a relative concept that changes for everyone. Someone is people are happy doing amazing things, others staying with their family, others travelling and others eating sweets.

For me it is a little different. Let’s start talking about the lack of money. When you don’t have money, everything is more complicated. If you live in a country in war it is much more difficult. As a child I had a dream: to live in my town, to get a degree at university, to find a job and to create my own family, with my parents that would have taken care of my future children.

Then arrived the war / then the war arrvied. Someone decided that ours and my dreams were not so important and that happiness was not for us. I searched for happiness in a boat through across the sea, only me and my brother… but the boat never arrived at its/our/the destination.

If you had asked me, what would you have wanted to be happy? I would have reached that new land, where I could to begin have begun again my life again, to gather my family and restart to the/my dream.
But I’m now deep  in the deep sea without hope and nor any miracle to waiting for. Now, for me, happiness it would have been to have another life.

Lots of well constructed natural sounding expressions and structures. Effectively written content.

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