January, 11. My upcoming ski travel.
I love skiing! Since 2011 every single year i drive to the mountains. I live in a perfect place, cause distance from me to the mountains 250 km as to the sea the same. In summer i might laying on the sand, than in winter i might skiing. This mounth i'll drive to the Arkhiz. It is a ski resort in Caucasus. I'm going to teach my 3 years old daughter to skiing. I pretty shure she'll be very excited about it, and we'll spend the best time together. This annual adventure always energizes us. I count the days to start our little journey.
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January, 11. My upcoming ski travel.
I love skiing! Since 2011 every single year i drive to the mountains. I live in a perfect place, because the distance from me to the mountains is 250 km, as and the same to the sea the same. In summer i might be laying on the sand, then in winter i might be skiing. This month i'll drive to the Arkhiz. It is a ski resort in the Caucasus. I'm going to teach my 3 year old daughter to ski. I pretty sure she'll be very excited about it, and we'll spend ("have" sounds more natural than "spend" in this context) the best time together. This annual adventure always energizes us. I count ("count down the days" sounds more natural) the days to start our little journey.Nice work! Suggestions I made were to make sentences sound more natural, but what you are saying is perfectly clear without the changes. :)
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Hey Deriabin.
Great corrections from Claire, so I don't have much to add. I just wanted to remind you that in English we always capitalize the letter "I" when referring to yourself. This also applies to it's contractions (I'll, I'm, etc.)
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