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First diary This year, I decided to start writing a diary in English everyday. I’ve never done it before so actually I don’t know what I write. Today was not so cold. Japan is warm in this winter. I went to a conveyor belt sushi with my mum. I love sushi. The cold yellowtail was so tasty! ...so the diary is like that? I definitely keep doing to write a diary to improve English. If you find any mistake on my notebook, please let me know. It is very helpful.

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First diary

This year, I decided to start writing a diary in English everyday.
I’ve never done it before so actually I don’t know what I to write.

Today was not so cold.
Japan is warm in this winter.

ALTERNATIVE BUT DIFFERENT MEANING: Japan is warm in winter

It depends whether you want to talk about the winter currently happening or winter in general in Japan.


I went to a sushi conveyor belt sushi with my mum. I love sushi. The cold yellowtail was so tasty!

...so the a diary is like that?

ALTERNATIVE: So, is that how you write a diary?

I definitely will keep doing a diary to write a diary in order to improve my English.

OR

I definitely will keep writing a diary to improve my English.

In terms of ideas for diary entry, you might think about:

What you did in the day?

The weather.

What is going on in the news.

How you feel.

Your plans for the future.

Your thoughts about your past.

How you feel about your English on that day, e.g. did you learn any new phrases or words.

Little creative exercises, e.g. short stories or poems.

I hope that is helpful,

Sean :)

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First diary

This year, I decided to start writing a diary in English everyday.
I’ve never done it before so actually I don’t know what I write.

Today was not so cold.
Japan is warm in this winter. (Japan is warm in winter OR Japan is warm this winter)
I went to a sushi conveyor belt sushi with my mum. I love sushi. The cold yellowtail was so tasty!

...so the diary is like that?

I definitely keep writing a diary to improve my English.

If you find any mistake on my notebook, please let me know. It is very helpful.

This seems like a great idea!  I would also recommend finding some helpful prompts to give you something to write about everyday.  Here are a few to start:


  • What scares you?
  • Do you have a plan? Do you need a plan? Have you had a plan fall spectacularly to pieces?
  • What is your take on soul mates?
  • Are you a worrier? Is there a particular worry that you can’t shake? How do you cope with worry?
  • Dear Past Me . . .
  • Dear Future Me .
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it's all right. keep writing whatever you want. one day you'll be a good dairy writer automatically!

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