Please correct my self-introduction in proper English.
Hello !
Please correct my English.
As you know, the Olympic game will be held in Tokyo , next year.
Of course I'm looking forward to this great event and I also want to help foreigner who visits Japan.
So I decided to brush my English up.
I work for a company in Tokyo.
I am 56 years old, an engineer of digital broadcasting.I have my wife and two sons.
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Please correct my self-introduction in proper English.
Hello !Please correct my English.
As you know, the Olympic games will be held in Tokyo next year.
Of course, I'm looking forward to this great event and I also want to help foreigners who visit Japan.
So I have decided to brush up on my English.
I work as an engineer for a digital broadcasting company in Tokyo.
I am 56 years old and have a wife and two sons.
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Hello !
Please correct my mistakes.
As you know, the Olympic Games will be held in Tokyo next year.
Of course, I'm looking forward to this great event and I also want to help foreigners who visit Japan.
So I decided to brush up my English.
I work for a company in Tokyo.
I am 56 years old, a digital broadcasting engineer. I have a wife and two sons. (It's better to say I'm married and I have two sons.)
Please correct my mistakes.
As you know, the Olympic Games will be held in Tokyo next year.
Of course, I'm looking forward to this great event and I also want to help foreigners who visit Japan.
So I decided to brush up my English.
I work for a company in Tokyo.
I am 56 years old, a digital broadcasting engineer. I have a wife and two sons. (It's better to say I'm married and I have two sons.)
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Please correct my self-introduction in proper English.
Hello !Please correct my English.
As you know, the Olympic Games will be held in Tokyo , next year.
Of course I'm looking forward to this great event and I also want to help foreigners who visits Japan.
So I decided to brush my English up.
I work for a company in Tokyo.
I am 56 years old, an engineer of digital broadcasting. I have a my wife and two sons.
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As you know, the Olympics will be held in Tokyo , next year.
(英語でよく「Olympics」だけで呼ばれてんでいますが、「Olympic Games」でもよろしいです。）
Of course, I'm looking forward to this great event and I also want to help foreigners who visit Japan.So I decided to brush up on my English skills.
(フレイズみたいことでこういうよく使います：「to brush up on my ______ skills」。）
I work for a company in Tokyo.
I am 56 years old, and an engineer of digital broadcasting. I have a wife and two sons.
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Please correct my self-introduction in proper English.
Hello!Please correct my English.
As you know, the Olympic games will be held in Tokyo next year.
Of course, I'm looking forward to this great event and I also want to help foreigners who visits Japan.
So That's why I decided to brush my English up.
I work for a company in Tokyo.
I am a 56-years-old, an engineer of digital broadcasting. I have my a wife and two sons.
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Here's the text again, just without all the colors and corrections - it might be easier to read :)
As you know, the Olympic games will be held in Tokyo next year.
Of course, I'm looking forward to this great event and I also want to help foreigners who visit Japan.
That's why I decided to brush my English up.
I work for a company in Tokyo.
I am a 56-year-old engineer of digital broadcasting. I have a wife and two sons.
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