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Interesting story. I would use the phrase "lightning strikes" rather than lightnings. I hope this helps. Bon travail!
2018 was the most stormy year in France (please correct this text)
With more that 700 000 lightnings strikes and 296 stormy days, 2018 was the year when France had has been the most hit strikes since 1987 and the creation of when a network "lighting detection" was created, according to "Météorage". 2018 is far beyond surpassed the year 1995 which only counted "695 000" lightning bolts. The year 2018 was so active that it has outnumbered all the records since September (??? year??? not quite clear what you mean).May was the most active month with 180 000 lightnings strikes(three times the average amount) and the day of August the 9th with 41 000 lightnings represent the most hit day of the year.
How can we explain that phenomenon? The heat is not only the answer. Many conditions were gathered are needed/combine to create storms. The spring season saw important temperature contrasts between warm and cold air. Some heatwaves during summer can also explain that phenomenon followed by sudden falls of temperatures.
Thank you. Cilla.
2018 Was the Stormiest Year in France (please correct my text below)**
According to Meteorage, a French company founded in 1987 to monitor a network "lightning detection" system, the country endured more than 700,000 lightning strikes over 296 stormy days, this past year. The lightning hits measured over that period were far beyond the 695,000 hits, which was the previous record, counted in 1995. In fact, lightning in 2018 was so numerous that it had already surpassed the prior record as early as the month of September.*
How can we explain this phenomenon since this past year’s record heat is not the only the answer? Many other unusual weather-related conditions contributed to create such intense and violent storms, notably, the months of spring experienced significant temperature contrasts between their warm- and cold-air fronts. Similarly, rapidly falling temperatures, along with its abundant humidity, quickly followed the summer heat waves.
Thus, given that the most severe storms naturally happen during the change of seasons, when different air masses are colliding, it is not surprising to learn that May, with 180,000 lightning strikes (three times the average amount!), was the most active month, while August 9, with 41,000 lightning strikes, was the day that experienced the most hits of the year.
Hi, Cilla. Good job! Whatever changes I made were simply to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, for ease of reading and continuity, to allow your post a better ending. I hope that this helps you. J.
P.S. Fantastic use of the picture! It greatly adds to your post!
*I wanted to know what Meteroage was—a magazine, a newspaper, a society, etc., since I thought its identity relevant to your post, so I googled it. Instead, I not only found out the above information, but also realized that I could then eliminate that rather lengthy and awkward initial sentence which leaves the reader thinking that those facts are unrelated. I think that it reads much better this way, as well as conveys the information in a more concise and logical manner.
**In English grammar, with most two-syllable adjectives (in this case—stormy) we form the comparative form with more and the superlative with most. Therefore, I understand why you titled your post as so. However, the other part of that rule is that if the two-syllable adjective ends with –y, we change it to ‘i, then add –er for the comparative form (stormier), or add –est for the superlative form (stormiest). Thus, the reason for my change of your title.
2018 was the most stormy (not wrong, just not the normal way to say it) stormiest year in France (please correct this text)
With more thatn 700 000 lightnings strikes/bolts and 296 stormy days, 2018 was the year when France has been the most hit had the most lightning since 1987 and when the creation of a network "lightning detection" network was created, according to "Météorage". 2018 is far beyond the year had far more than 1995 which only counted only "695 000" lightning bolts. The year 2018 was so active that it has outnumbered all the records since September. It's not clear what you mean here.May was the most active month with 180 000 lightnings bolts (three times the average amount number) and the day of August the 9th 9th of August, with 41 000 lightnings bolts, represents the most hit day day with the most strikes/hardest hit day of the year.
How can we explain that phenomenon? The heat is not only the only answer. Many conditions were gathered combined to create storms. The spring season saw important temperature contrasts between warm and cold air. Some heatwaves during summer can also explain that phenomenon followed by sudden falls of temperatures.
Thank you. Cilla.
It can be hard to know where to put the word only https://onlinewritingtraining.com.au/2018/07/only-position-in-a-sentence/
Amount is for things we don't count (a lot/a little/a liter/a kilo so for things like love, water and weight); number is used for counting (2 people/50 dogs/20 hats) https://grammarist.com/usage/amount-number/
2018 was the most stormy year in France (please correct this text)
With more that 700,000 lightning strikes and 296 stormy days, 2018 was France's stormiest year since 1987, according to "Météorage". A "lightning detection" network was also created this year. 2018 far surpassed 1995, which only counted 695,000 lightning bolts. 2018 was so active that it outnumbered all the records since September. I'm not sure what this means. What did 2018 outnumber?May was the most active month with 180,000 lightning strikes (three times the average number), and August 9th was the most active day with 41,000.
How can we explain this phenomenon? The heat is not only the reason. Many conditions are required to create storms. In the spring, there are significant temperature differences between warm and cold air. In the summer, heatwaves followed by sudden drops in temperature can also cause this phenomenon.
Thank you. Cilla.
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