My new year's day ritual
A new year is a new year.
This sentence just popped up in my mind when I have been sitting at my desk to write something in the Italki. Now I'm enjoying a fresh mood for a new year as this new year has started.
When I was younger, I used to give less importance to "new year's" things like making new year's resolutions, going for a sunrise, etc. I felt like those were rather cliches. But, as I'm growing older, I came to enjoy holiday seasons more, in particular, the end of the year and the start of a new year.
On the last day of this year(I mean, the last year now), I had some quiet time for myself to look back on the whole year for a while, and made a small wish for an upcoming year. I have a habit of having some time alone at the night of my last day of a year, writing down my wishes and putting it in a little box so that I can open it at the last day of the next year.
I did this this year as well and had some time to read my previous "yearly" wishes. It was quite fun to read them and even touching to find how much I've changed.
For me, it feels like a proper ending of the previous year and a little preparation for an upcoming year. It does help me to enjoy a fresh mood the next morning, and it did this year as well.
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My New Year's Day* ritual
A new year is a new year.This sentence just popped up in my mind while I had been sitting at my desk to write something on the Italki. Now I'm enjoying a fresh mood for a new year as this new year has started. When I was younger, I used to give less importance to "New Year's" things like making New Year's resolutions, going for a sunrise, etc. I felt like those were rather cliched. But, as I'm growing older, I came to enjoy holiday seasons more, in particular, the end of the year and the start of a new year.
On the last day of this year(I mean, the last year now), I had some quiet time for myself to look back on the whole year for a while and made a small wish for an upcoming year. I have a habit of having some time alone at the night of my last day of a year, writing down my wishes and putting it in a little box so that I can open it at the last day of the next year.
I did this this time** as well as had some time to read my previous "yearly" wishes. It was quite fun to read them and even touching to find how much I've changed.
For me, it feels like a proper ending of the previous year and a little preparation for an upcoming year. It does help me to enjoy a fresh mood the next morning, and it did this year as well.
*When referring to the concept of a new year, it's lowercase, but when referring to the holiday, it should be capitalized.
**I'm not sure entirely if doubling up like that is truly incorrect or not, but I think the sentence might flow better as "I did it this time", "I did it again this time", or simply "I did this time".
You did a very fine job with this piece, though. Honestly, it's hardly distinguishable from some works by native speakers. I hope I was able to be a little bit helpful.
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