What is your dream work?

(1) For the average person, work is the most important and necessary thing in life (2) which occupies at least one-third a day, (3) even more than 12 hours, (4) which just likes many internet company's "996", (5) because it is the only resource of making money to maintenance our living (6) and is also the only way to fly with our talents and dreams.
There is maybe a good question which (is)*1 worth some deep thought,*2 what is your dream work? Is it as the usual way that the best job is you can wake up naturally, and count your high salary till hand cramping*3? Or other kinds of?
Could you give any better answers for this?*4

try to keep your sentences at a maximum of 3 parts. if you write in word, it can check your grammar and suggest where to put commas, to split a run-on sentence into parts. when you have 2 or 3 parts, consider cutting it up. then, you can write the rest in a new sentence.

*1 this phrase comes in two forms; to be worth, "it is worth". so, remember adding the 'is' in front!

*2 here you can use semi-colon. It works like this; you write the example, or the question you're introducing, after the semi-colon

*3 Instead of using the noun-like "Hand cramping", you can use the verb-like "until your hand cramps". this is more natural.

*4 "Do you have any better answers for this?" is more natural, if you're asking for any valid answer. "to have" can be used instead of "to give" when requesting answers. its more indirect, and more polite