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What's wrong, Monica? “Yes papa, everything okay. The flight was quiet, Sicily is wonderful, and now I’m visiting the ruins of Valle dei Templi, I love this place; it is magic!” Monica explained on the phone while she was watching Facebook on the screen. “Yes, mam, Salvatore is a very nice, everyone here is very nice.” She confessed before stopping her forefinger on Alexander’s profile. Her mind became estranged from the conversation. She couldn’t even hear nanny Ligaya’s voice in the background because of the shock to see a photo where a girls was embracing Xender on the beach. They both were laughing and Alexander seemed very happy. “I love you, dad, too!” She closed the calling. “Everything okay, Monica?” Salvatore asked. “You look pale.” He held her by arms before she fainted. Then he lifted her up and brought her into the shadow like a knight in an old film. Concetta blushed with range. She breathed deeply and picked up Monica’s mobile phone with the intention to destroy it, but the photo that she saw on the screen changed her mind. Maybe is because this pic that Monica fainted, she thought, this boy should interest her, she grinned, he’ll be the key thanks to which Salvatore will forget Monica and he will love only me. Concetta looked at her loving reveal’s mobile again, took a picture of Salvatore and Monica together and posted it on Monica’s Facebook profile. On the other side of the Mediterranean Sea, on a wonderful beach in Côte d’Azur, Alexander was checking his HOME on Facebook. Suddenly his mouth opened and he was paralyzed with his ice-cream pressed on his lips. In front of his eyes there was a pic with Monica lying on an old step and a handsome boy who was supporting her. The scene remembered him a loving picture from Romanticism and the jealously grew up in his heart. “ “Hey, Xender, are you ready for a swim?” His fan Kim asked him friendly, but he didn’t answered. “ Everythin okay?” She insisted. Xender nodded. “So come on friends! Come here and took a picture for our album of holidays” Kim shouted, and when a tourist was read to shot she embraced Alexander again trying to licking his ice-cream. Misunderstanding after misunderstanding got Monica very jealous and sad. She continued to look at the screen and tears run along her cheeks. “Monica, what’s wrong?” Salvatore worried and took out a hanky to dry her tears.

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“Hey Xender! are you Ready for a swim?” His fan Kim asked him friendly but no reply came he didn’t answered. “ Everything's okay?” came another concerned questionShe insisted.

This time, Xender nodded.

“Come on then friends! Come here and took a Another photo picture for our album of holidays album!” Kim shouted. Just and when a tourist was read to the shot was snapped, Kim gave she embraced Alexander again as he trying to licked his ice-cream.
Misunderstanding after misunderstanding got Monica very jealous and sad.

She Monica continued to look at the screen staring at the photo on the screen.  and Tears run along streaming down her cheeks.

“Monica, what’s wrong Something's the matter?” Salvatore was worried and took out a hanky handkerchief to dry her tears.

A better title after reading would be, "Trouble in Paradise!"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WkqIJk_oh7k
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What's wrong, Monica?

“Yes Papa, everything is okay. The flight was quiet, Sicily is wonderful, and now I’m visiting the ruins of Valle dei Templi, I love this place; it is magic!” Monica explained on the phone while she was watching Facebook on the screen. “Yes, mam, Salvatore is a very nice, everyone here is very nice," she confessed before stopping her forefinger on Alexander’s profile. Her mind became estranged from the conversation. She couldn’t even hear nanny Ligaya’s voice in the background because of the shock to see a photo where a girls was embracing Xender on the beach. They both were laughing and Alexander seemed very happy. “I love you, dad, too!” She ended the call. 
“Everything okay, Monica?” Salvatore asked. “You look pale.” He held her by arms before she fainted. Then he lifted her up and brought her into the shadow like a knight in an old film.
Concetta blushed with range. She breathed deeply and picked up Monica’s mobile phone with the intention to destroy it, but the photo that she saw on the screen changed her mind. Maybe it is because this pic that Monica fainted, she thought, this boy should interest her, she grinned, he’ll be the key thanks to which Salvatore will forget Monica and he will love only me. Concetta looked at her loving reveal’s mobile again, took a picture of Salvatore and Monica together and posted it on Monica’s Facebook profile.
On the other side of the Mediterranean Sea, on a wonderful beach in Côte d’Azur, Alexander was checking his HOME on Facebook. Suddenly his mouth opened and he was paralyzed with his ice-cream pressed on his lips. In front of his eyes there was a pic with Monica lying on an old step and a handsome boy who was supporting her. The scene remembered him a loving picture from Romanticism and the jealously grew up in his heart. “
“Hey, Xender, are you ready for a swim?” His fan Kim asked him friendly, but he didn’t answered. “ Everythin okay?” She insisted.
Xender nodded.
“So come on, friends! Come here and take a picture for our album of holidays” Kim shouted, and when a tourist was ready to shoot she embraced Alexander again trying to licking his ice-cream.
Misunderstanding after misunderstanding got Monica very jealous and sad. She continued to look at the screen and tears run along her cheeks.
“Monica, what’s wrong?” Salvatore worried and took out a hanky to dry her tears.
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Concetta's blushed blood seethed with range. Finally she took a deep breathed deeply and picked up Monica’s the fallen mobile phone with the intention to destroy it. but the photo that she saw Then something on the screen changed her mind. Maybe is because So!  This is picture that made Monica fainted, she thought, This boy should interest her, she is the key to the solution of her problem.  Concetta grinned.  he’ll be the key thanks to which Salvatore will forget Monica and he will love only me. Concetta looked at her loving reveal’s mobile again, took a picture of Salvatore and Monica together and posted it on Monica’s Facebook profile. A plan was hatched.  A photo of Monica and Salvatore became the profile on Monica's

On the other side of the Mediterranean Sea, on a wonderful beach in Côte d’Azur beach, Alexander was checking his HOME on Facebook homepage. Suddenly his mouth gaped opened and he was paralyzed with his ice-cream still pressing on his lips. In front of his eyes There was a pic with Monica lying on an old step and lifted up in the arms of a handsome boy who was supporting her. The scene remembered him a loving picture from Romanticism and the jealously grew up in his heart. “ It was like a scene of a damsel in distress and her true love was there to save her.  From his heart, a pang of jealousy reared up its ugly head.
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What's wrong, Monica?

“Yes Papa, everything's okay. The flight was smooth and quiet, Sicily is wonderful. and now I’m now visiting the ruins of Valle dei Templi ruins.  I love this place! i'is magic!” We don't talk in long sentences.

Monica explained talked into on the phone while as she was watching looked at the Facebook on the screen. “Yes, Mam... Salvatore is a very nice, and so's everyone here is very nice.”

She confessed as she tapped  before stopping her forefinger on Alexander’s profile. Her mind became estranged from the conversation. No longer did she couldn’t even hear Nanny Ligaya’s voice in the background.  She was  because of the shocked to see a photo where a bevy of girls was embracing Xender on the beach. They both were laughing and Alexander seemed very happy. “I love you, and daddy too!”

Then Monica disconnected closed the line calling.

“Is everything okay, Monica?” Salvatore asked.

“You looked pale.”

He held her by arms before she fainted. Then Monica fainted and Salvatore quickly came to her before she fell.  He lifted swept her up and brought her into the shadow like a knight in an old film movie.

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