Coral's notebook entry: Jun 30, 2010

It's my third day working here. As a freshman, there are lots of things I should learn. Our company is aimed at garments exports. We have fixed customers from USA and Korea and a strong team. Through communicating with my collegue, I found my spoken English is quite poor, even if I have passed TEM8. So, I urge to learn some skills for spoken English. I want to speak English as fluent as native speakers. pls SOS SOS

Some sentences could be rearranged to be more fluid, but the meaning is quite clear without change.

Our company is aimed at garments exports => Our company exports garments and we have fixed customers from USA and Korea and a strong team.

Really short sentences tend to sound like reading a list, so if you have two short sentences that are related to each other, join them with an "and" to make them sound more natural. Watch that the "." (full stop) goes before the space of the next sentence rather than after.

Coral is my mother's name and you don't see it very often ;)
Good luck studying ...