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Merry Christmas Have had never been alone during the Christmas since I could remember. I was either spent time with my girlfriend or with my family.

Though it kinda gives me an opportunity to observe people walking around on the street, holding someone’s hand, looked like they were really happy. I was sitting there, and every once in a while I could notice a couple nearby exchanging their gifts and cards. They were reading the card with a smile on their faces, surprised by the gifts prepared by their lovers. All of a sudden I felt really great, I was really happy for them. It might be one of the best Christmas I have had in my life.

Merry Christmas:)

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Merry Christmas

I have had never been alone during the Christmas since I could can remember.* I was either spent time with my girlfriend or with my family.

Though it kinda gave me the opportunity to observe people walking around on the street holding    someone’s hands**,  looking/and they looked like they  were really happy. I was sitting there and every once in a while I could would notice a couple nearby exchanging their gifts and cards. They were reading the cards with a smiles on their faces, surprised by the gifts prepared by their lovers. All of a sudden I felt really great, I was really happy for them. It might be one of the best Christmas'*** I have had in my life.

Merry Christmas:)


*"I had never been...since I could remember," or "I have never been alone...since I can."     Had + could, Have + can. Have + can makes more sense in this context since you are talking about this Christmas. If you were telling a story from a past year you would say "I had never..."

**people is plural already, if you talk about an individual person they would be "holding someones hand"

***Christmas is plural, ends in "s" so it has apostrophe and no extra "s" : Christmas'


Nice work! Easy to understand what you mean. 


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