Journal #62 Influence of Energy Drinks to Children
England considers a ban on selling energy drinks to children. Prime minister Theresa May said the purpose of the ban is to reduce childhood obesity, which is she called "one of the greatest health challenges this country faces." According to the UK government, more than 66 percent of people in England aged between 10 and 17, and about 25 percent of people aged between six and nine, drink energy drinks. In addition, it's worrying about links between energy drinks and bad behavior of children in a classroom.
In my opinion, my country doesn't need to ban on it immediately. I've never drunk any energy drinks while my childhood. However I'm not sure about this reason, my parents could had been taking care for foods I eat. Most of Japanese children are slim. Japanese food is healthy, so it's good for health of children not only of adults.
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Journal #62 Influence of Energy Drinks to Children
England considers is considering a ban on selling energy drinks to children. Prime minister Theresa May said the purpose of the ban is to reduce childhood obesity, which is she called "one of the greatest health challenges this country faces." According to the UK government, more than 66 percent of people in England aged between 10 and 17, and about 25 percent of people aged between six and nine, drink energy drinks. In addition, it's worrying there are concerns about links between energy drinks and bad behavior of children in a the classroom.In my opinion, my country doesn't need to ban on it them immediately. I've never drunk (1) any energy drinks while throughout my childhood. However I'm not sure about this reason logic, my parents could had have been taking care for careful about the foods I eat ate. Most of Japanese children are slim. Japanese food is healthy, so it's good for the health of children not only of adults.
(1) The use of this tense suggests you are still in your childhood. If you are an adult looking back at your childhood change "I have never drunk" to "I never drank".
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