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What about me? Part 1 My name is Karina. I`m nineteen years old. I study in the third year of university in Tourism. I like my specialty and I want to work in tourism business. I`m going to own enterprise, maybe in 5-7 years. I am sure of that in my profession, experience is very important . So, since 2017 untill 2025 years I am going to work a lot of countries. In 2017 I have worked in hotel in Bulgaria during 2 month. There I have gotten experience of live abroad and be self-reliant. But for me that time was very difficult, because that my first long journey abroad when I was without my family.

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What about me?

Part 1
My name is Karina. I`m nineteen years old. I am studying in the third year at of university in Tourism. I like my specialty and I want to work in the tourism business. I`m going to own my own enterprise, maybe in 5-7 years.
I am sure of that in my profession, experience is very important . So, since 2017 until l 2025 years I am going to work in a lot of countries.
In 2017 I have worked in an hotel in Bulgaria for during 2 months. There I have gained gotten experience of living live abroad and being self-reliant. But for me that time was very difficult, because that my first long journey abroad when I was without my family.
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What about me?

Part 1
My name is Karina. I'm nineteen years old. I am studying in the third year of university in Tourism. I like my specialty and I want to work in the tourism business. I'm going to own an enterprise, maybe in five to seven years.
I am sure of that in my profession, experience is very important . So, from 2017 until 2025, years I will work in a lot of countries.
In 2017 I have worked in a hotel in Bulgaria for two months. There I received experience of living abroad and being self-reliant. But For me however, that time was very difficult, because that my first long journey abroad where I was without my family.


Well written, please do keep trying :) 

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What about me?

Part 1
My name is Karina. I`m nineteen years old. I study in the third year of university in Tourism. I like my specialty and I want to work in tourism business. I`m going to own enterprise, maybe in 5-7 years.
I am sure of that in my profession, experience is very important . So, since 2017 untill 2025 years I am going to work a lot of countries.
In 2017 I have worked in hotel in Bulgaria during 2 month. There I have gotten experience of live abroad and be self-reliant. But for me that time was very difficult, because that my first long journey abroad when I was without my family.

My name is Karina.  I'm nineteen years old.  I am a third year university student studying Tourism. I like my course and I want to work in the tourism industry.  I'm going to own my own business, perhaps in five to seven years time.

I am sure that in my profession experience is very important.  So, over the next several years I am going to work in many countries.  In 2017 I worked in a hotel in Bulgaria for two months.  I experienced living abroad and being self-reliant.  But, it was a difficult time because it was my first time away from home.

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I like your introducing..ambitions and wishes.. I liked it :)
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The paragraph is too long and people often won't consider it. Try to be specific and to the point if you would like to get response.

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