my study plan.
Hello, everyone! :) I wrote this for exchange program in Germany. But I'm not sure that I wrote this without mistake.
Could you correct this please ?? if you help me, it would be so helpful.
Since I was young, I has loved Animation so much. Whenever I have terrible day, I watch animation. Because good animation always makes me warm and makes me see the world more beautiful. So naturally my dream became that create contents that can make people warm and happy. In order to achieve this dream, I started to study art in high school. And finally I attended the oo-university and learned animation. But commercial education way in oo was not for me, so I've wandered a lot for about 2 years. During this time, I kept drawing. I tried to find my drawing style and improve drawing skill. And I posted my drawings in Instagram and got feedbacks and communicated with people from different cultures. And I met german friend in Penpal site. Thanks to him, I became interested in German, German culture, German songs, art history in Germany. It's made me want to do many things like reading some German literature written in German to get closer to author's feeling or seeing German historical works of art in person to get inspiration or learning Art in Germany etc. And then finally I transferred from oo university to xx university and my major changed from oo to xx. And I was looking for opportunity to study in Germany and when I found 'ooo' in student exchange program list, I thought "This what I'm looking for!".
If I could attend ooo as a exchange student, there are many classes that I want to take. and I will keep learning German to make many German friends and communicate with them. Now I keep learning German and drawing too, hoping I can attend ooo. I will try my best to get many experiences and challenge many things. I believe that any experience could be a good stepping stone for me. When I return from Germany, My drawing skill will be improve and I will be closer to my dream. Thank you for reading my study plan.
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my study plan.
Hello, everyone! :) I wrote this for an exchange program in Germany. But I'm not sure that I wrote this without mistake.Could you correct this please ?? if you help me, it would be so helpful.
Since I was young, I have loved animation so much. Whenever I have a terrible day, I watch animation because good animation always makes me feel warm and makes the world seem more beautiful. So naturally, my dream became to create content that can make people warm and happy. In order to achieve this dream, I started to study art in high school. And finally, I attended the oo-university and learned animation. But commercial education was not for me so I've wandered a lot for about 2 years. During this time, I kept drawing. I tried to find my drawing style and improve my drawing skill. I posted my drawings on Instagram, got feedback and communicated with people from different cultures. I met a German friend on a Penpal site. Thanks to him, I became interested in German, German culture, German songs, and art history in Germany. It's made me want to do many things like reading some German literature written in German to get closer to the authors feeling or seeing German historical works of art in person to get inspiration or learning Art in Germany etc. And then finally I transferred from oo university to xx university and my major changed from oo to xx. I was looking for an opportunity to study in Germany and when I found 'ooo' on a student exchange program list, I thought "This is what I'm looking for!".
If I could attend ooo as an exchange student, there are many classes that I want to take and I will keep learning German to make many German friends and communicate with them. Now I keep learning German and drawing too, hoping I can attend ooo. I will try my best to get many experiences and challenge many things. I believe that any experience could be a good stepping stone for me. When I return from Germany, my drawing skill will be improved and I will be closer to my dream. Thank you for reading my study plan.
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Sinéad / Thank you for your kind words :)!!
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Rena/ Thank you for reading this. I'm just not sure that there are some typo or bad grammar. :)
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This is very good. I hope you enjoy your exchange. :)
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What is the question on the application? Is there a word limit?
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