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The environment Nowadays. Environment is losing balance run fast. Specially in last few decades, The mining and heavy factory are very intensely growing around the world. Meanwhile, did maybe we forget motherland which we live and work? So only the government shouldn't concern about this situation and shoulder for long times. It's relevant with all individuals and we must concern about this condition and attempt to fix the bad problems which is having in earth. So we can together treat it if someone sufficient kindly soul and recognize consequence which will be came here in future. Admittedly, Environment changes are driven to wrong way and don't deem cannot find solution which can fix this tricky result. Now we must fight to bring back the normal condition in the environment instead of deforestation and support any pollution. Would you like write correction for it?

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The environment

Nowadays, the environment is losing balance quickly. Especially in last few decades. The heavy mining and factories are growing very intensely around the world. During this, did we possibly forget the motherland in which we live and work? So,  not only the government should be concerned about this situation and shoulder for long times. It's relevant for all individuals and we must be concerned about this condition and attempt to fix the awful problems which are occurring on the earth. Together, we can treat it kindly and recognize the consequences which may arrive in the future. Admittedly,  the environmental changes are going in the wrong direction and we don't seem to be able to find a solution which can fix this difficult future. We must fight to bring back the natural condition of the environment instead of the deforestation and support of pollution.


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