Corrections · 1
Honesty, loyalty or humor, which do you think is the most important in friendship?
Personally speaking1, I think honesty is the most important in any friendship. First of all, I don't want to be friend with liars2. I won't be able to relax if I know this person always lie to others. And I can't share my things with she/he because I know my secret won't be safe with he/she.
The second reason is that if I associate with liars, then I will also be construed as one! I don't want to be considered as an liar because if I make a friend who is not honest and alway lies, I will be considered as the same kind of person.
1. You can also use "in my opinion"
2. or , "... with a liar"
Don't leave a new line for each sentence. Only in poems do you do this. All contractions must have an apostrophe. Don't use he/she, him/her all over the place. Makes your writing ugly. You don't have to be so politically correct. You are not writing a political speech. Even if you do, you can use plurals. It makes your speech sounds like it comes from a manual.
http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
