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高雄港口 Kaohsiung Port Cruise 我們今天要在駁二大義輕軌站商船.請留意從2018年12月開始售票上船的地點會改到駁二的另外一邊. Today we’re going to get on the boat at Pier 2 Dayi light rail station. Please note from December 2018, the location where you buy a ticket and get on the boat is changing to the other end of Pier 2. 在這裏可以買遊艇票. Here’s where you can buy your ferry ticket. 其實有幾班不同的航線但是這一班是我最愛的因爲我們會看到港口裏的每一個活動 我覺很興奮 很有高雄特色 There’s actually a few cruise routes you can take but this one is my favourite because we’re going to see everything that goes on in the harbour, which I think is a really exciting experience, and it’s something that’s very special to Kaohsiung. 從駁開到紅毛港要45分鐘 船上有一個可以吹冷氣的小房間 也可以聼導游 導游只會說中文所以如果聽不懂中文會有點難 他就會説明港口的活動 我們看到了海軍軍港 也看到了帶汽車零件進出港口的船還有很多. It’s a 45 minute cruise down the port from Pier 2 down to Hongmaogang. There is an air conditioned section in the boat where you can listen to a guide. The guide will only speak in Chinese so if you don’t understand Chinese that’s a little bit difficult. He'’s just explaining the things that are going on in the port. We saw things like military ships, we saw ships that were shipping car parts in and out of the port and lots of other things 我自己最喜歡的是看到港裏的吊車用來湧來移動貨櫃因為看起來像一個手抓樂高 因爲從那麽遠的地方看貨櫃看起來很小 因爲港裏的船跟貨櫃那麽巨大而且進出的東西那麽多所以我感到敬畏,覺得這個經驗很棒 我覺得船票的價格很值得.我覺得這個經驗超棒 My personal favourite part was seeing the cranes in the port picking up shipping containers and putting them on and off the ships because it kind of looks like a hand picking up lego, it’s that small from far away. But just the sheer size of the ships and the shipping containers in the port and just the sheer amount of stuff that’s coming in and out of this port is just amazing, I think it’s a really exciting experience and I think the cost of the ticket to take that cruise is well worth it. I think it’s a fantastic experience. 謝謝你的幫忙 :-) 婷婷

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我們今天要在駁二大義(is that 大義2号码头?)輕軌站上船.請留意(注意is better)從2018年12月開始,售票和上船的地點會(将会is better)改到駁二的另外一邊.
Today we’re going to get on the boat at Pier 2 Dayi light rail station. Please note from December 2018, the location where you buy a ticket and get on the boat is changing to the other end of Pier 2.

在這裏可以買遊艇票.你可以在这里买游艇票。(we are used to putting the lociation in the middle of sentence)
Here’s where you can buy your ferry ticket.

其實有好幾班不同的航线,但(是)這一班是我最愛的。因爲我們會看到港口裏的一切, 我觉得很興奮,而且东西都很有高雄特色。
There’s actually a few cruise routes you can take but this one is my favourite because we’re going to see everything that goes on in the harbour, which I think is a really exciting experience, and it’s something that’s very special to Kaohsiung.

從駁開到紅毛港要45分鐘 ,船上有一個可以吹冷氣的小房間 也可以聼導游(你可以在船上的一个空调间听导游解说)。導游只會說中文所以如果聽不懂中文會有點難,他只讲解港口的活動。  我們看到了军舰, 也看到了装载汽車零件的船进出港口,还有很多其他东西。
It’s a 45 minute cruise down the port from Pier 2 down to Hongmaogang. There is an air conditioned section in the boat where you can listen to a guide. The guide will only speak in Chinese so if you don’t understand Chinese that’s a little bit difficult. He'’s just explaining the things that are going on in the port. We saw things like military ships, we saw ships that were shipping car parts in and out of the port and lots of other things

我自己最喜歡的是看到港裏的吊車用來湧來移動集装箱,因為这看起來有点像一只抓起樂高积木的手, 因爲集装箱從那麽很遠的地方看起來很小。但是正是港口裏的大船和集装箱,还有那么多進出港口的東西使我感到不可思议(or 震撼),我覺得這是個很棒的经历(经验是你学习到的东西,经历是你遇到过的事情,一定要区分好哦!) 。我觉得船票的價格很值得(值:价格合适),這是個超棒的体验!(体验与经历的意思差不多)
My personal favourite part was seeing the cranes in the port picking up shipping containers and putting them on and off the ships because it kind of looks like a hand picking up lego, it’s that small from far away. But just the sheer size of the ships and the shipping containers in the port and just the sheer amount of stuff that’s coming in and out of this port is just amazing, I think it’s a really exciting experience and I think the cost of the ticket to take that cruise is well worth it. I think it’s a fantastic experience.

謝謝你的幫忙 :-)
婷婷

Good job! 加油^0^~!
You had better use more Chinese punctuations when u write.
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根據 "https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%A7%81%E4%BA%8C%E8%97%9D%E8%A1%93%E7%89%B9%E5%8D%80": "駁二" 意旨 "第二號接駁碼頭", 並非 "第二號碼頭", 雖然英文翻譯為 "The Pier-2".
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in addition, port is 码头 not 驳 in simple Chinese. 加油! 你的汉语已经很棒啦!

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