A friend visit me in my city Please, help me in this writing. It's very important for me. and thanks!!! Dear Sarah I hope you are ok in London. I am writing you because we are meeting the next summ

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A friend visit me in my city Please, help me in this writing. It's very important for me. and thanks!!! Dear Sarah I hope you are ok in London. I am writing you because we are meeting the next summer in your holidays and I have thought in carry you my city. Puebla city is pretty and interesting, I think you will like it. My family and I are planning to visit many places in the city. We are starting the day early at 10 am. and we're visiting La Catedral near the Zocalo. We are taking photos there and the Zocalo. Then we are going to the Parían, there you could buy some souvenirs. Afterwards, we are going to Los Fuertes and we are visiting two interesting museums there. The next day, in Sunday, we are going to Cholula visiting the pyramid of Cholula. Finally we are going to a coffee shop called La Escondida. I really want that day arrive it because we are going to have fun. See you soon.

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A friend is visiting me in my city. Please, help me correct this writing. It's very important to me. Thank you!

Dear Sarah

I hope you are okay in London. I am writing to you because we are meeting up next summer during your holidays and I have thought carefully about you being in my city. Puebla city is pretty and interesting, I think you will like it.

My family and I are planning to visit many places in the city. We are starting the day early, at 10 am. and we're visiting La Catedral near the Zocalo. We are taking photos there of the Zocalo.

Then we are going to the Parían, there you could buy some souvenirs.

Afterwards, we are going to Los Fuertes and we are visiting two interesting museums there.

The next day, on Sunday, we are going to Cholula to visiting the pyramid of Cholula. Finally we are going to a coffee shop called La Escondida.

I really want that day to arrive it because we are going to have fun.

See you soon.

Hope this helps and I hope your adventure goes well :)

Dear Sarah,

I hope you are OK in London. I am writing you about our meeting next summer during your holidays, and I have thought about your visit to my city. Puebla City is beautiful and interesting, and I think you will like it. My family and I are planning to take you to many places in the city. We will start the day early, at 10 a.m., with a visit to La Catedral near the Zocalo. We will take photos there and at the Zocalo. Then we are going to the Parían, where you could buy some souvenirs. Afterwards, we are going to Los Fuertes, and we are visiting two interesting museums there. The next day, Sunday, we are going to Cholula to visit the pyramid of Cholula. Finally, we are going to a coffee shop called La Escondida. I can't wait for your visit, because we are going to have fun! See you soon.

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