My cat
My cat name Dajius XVII. He is big animals. I like stroking his wool. When he looks at me he is so cute. I like my cat!
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My cat
My cat's name is Dajius XVII. He is a big animals. I like stroking his wool fur. When he looks at me he is so cute. I like my cat!Please find the above highlighting changes and below rewritten with the changes made:
My cat
My cat's name is Dajius XVII. He is a big animal. I like stroking his fur. When he looks at me he is so cute. I like my cat!
NOTES
1) Perhaps on the last like, if you really want to emphasise your affection for your cat, you can say "I love my cat!"
2) The "animal" could possibly be made more specific, depending on what you want to emphasise, by saying "He is a big cat."
3) We associate wool with animals such as sheep, whereas cats have fur.
I hope that helps :)
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My cat name is Dajius XVII. He is a big animal. I like stroking his wool. When he looks at me he is so cute. I like my cat!
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My cat
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