Complaint Mail
Dr. Sir,
During the last year, in the local tourist information office, we have been noted that some tourists are not very aware of our culture. This is why we are writing to you in order to let you know of this problem, on the hope you can put means to try solving it.
As a suggestion, tourists should be inform of the main city landmarks from the brochures in their countries of origin. we considered this point totally essential.
Thank you in advance for your review
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Complaint Mail Letter of complaint
During the last past year, in the local tourist information office, we have been noted noticed that some tourists are not very aware of our culture. This is why We are writing to you in order to let you know of this problem, on in the hope you can put means to try to solveing it.
As a suggestion, tourists should be informed of the main city landmarks from in the brochures in from their countries of origin. We consider ed this point totally essential.
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Dear Javier, please find some corrections and suggestions noted above. Some other points:
1) Perhaps a more natural phrasing of "As a suggestion, tourists should be informed of the main city landmarks from in the brochures in from their countries of origin. we considered this point totally essential" might be:
"As a possible solution to this problem, we suggest informing the tourists of the main city landmarks in the brochures they receive in their country of origin."
2) Instead of "culture" perhaps use "cultural landmarks" or "cultrual attractions" if you mean landmarks and other famous sites. Culture has a broader meaning than cultural landmarks, e.g. one can talk of Parisian culture (and that this may involve drinking wine, smoking cigarettes, wearing fashionable clothes) and a Parisian cultural landmark (such as the Eiffel Tower).
I hope that is helpful in some way :)
Sean
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Complaint Mail
Dear Sir, (PUT THE PERSON'S NAME HERE)In the last year, we in the local tourist information office have been noted that some tourists are not very aware of our culture. This is why we are writing to you in order to let you know of this problem in the hopes that you can help solve it.
We suggest that tourists should be informed of the landmarks in our cities through brochures in their countries of origin. (??through brochures that they can get in their native countries/in their native languages?) we considered this essential FOR WHAT? TO DO WHAT?.
Thank you in advance for your consideration
NOTE:
this is not a letter of complaint (I don't know if that's the assignment you were given). That type of letter would be "your company's product doesn't work" or "the garbage in my neighborhood hasn't been picked up for two weeks" etc.
To turn this into a letter of complaint, you would need to say that this "Sir's) office is not doing something and why it is a problem. And your solution.
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