Girlfriend
I went to a beauty salon with one of my girlfriends today and we had the milk bath in the way of ancient Roman. Both my girlfriend and I were in good mood, we talked and talked, from our family to our work... then she played some songs that among my favorites and asked me to relax. l met her at my middle 20's. We've been friends almost ten years. She is a woman with high EQ,always makes me pleasant. I am so lucky to have her as my bff, and l will certainly cherish this relationship.
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Girlfriend
I went to a beauty salon with one of my girlfriends today and we had the milk bath in the way of the ancient Romans. Both my girlfriend and I were in good mood, we talked and talked, from our family to our work... then she played some songs that were among my favorites and asked me to relax. l met her in my middle 20's. We've been friends almost ten years. She is a woman with a high EQ, always makes me feel pleasant. I am so lucky to have her as my BFF, and l will certainly cherish this relationship.Indeed, value significant relationships :) Well written :)
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I went to a beauty salon with one of my friends today and we had a milk bath, just like the Ancient Romans. My friend and I were in good mood, we talked and talked about different topics, from our family to our work... then she played some songs that were among my favorites and asked me to relax. l met her in my mid-20's. We've been friends for almost ten years. She is a woman of high emotional intelligence and always makes me feel good. I am so lucky to have her as my bff, and l will certainly cherish this relationship.
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I would prefer "we talked away..." or "we talked all day" rather than "we talked and talked".
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