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Working in a shelter Working in an animal shelter has been the craziest job I have ever done. I spent my days running after 42 goats (more alliens than goats), petting 2 love-hungry cats, trying to connect with 13 rescue horses and training a semi-killer dog. In the end I can only say that this adventure has been one of the most rewarding experiences of my life. I learned that every animal has his or her story, fears, personality, to sum up: each one is unique. They deserved the respect of being cared for with love and compasion.

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Working in a Shelter

Working in an animal shelter has been the craziest job I have ever done! I spent my days there running after forty-two goats (seemingly, more an alien life form than mammal!), petting two love-starved cats, connecting (or trying to!) with thirteen rescued horses, and training one semi-feral dog. In the end, I can only say that this adventure has been one of the most rewarding experiences of my life! I learned that each animal has its own story, fears, personality, etc. In other words, each one is unique. Whatever their shape and size, they all deserve the respect of being cared for by us humans with love and compassion.

Hi Franzinet, good job! Whatever changes that I’ve made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to add more information, and to allow your sentences to “flow.” I hope that this helps you. J.

P.S. Nice picture! It really adds to your post! It looks and sounds like you enjoyed yourself immensely! I am very happy for you...

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Working in a shelter

Working in an animal shelter has been the craziest job I have ever done/had. I spent my days running after 42 goats (more aliens (?) than goats), petting 2 love-hungry cats, trying to connect with 13 rescue horses and training a semi-killer dog. In the end I can only say that this adventure has been one of the most rewarding experiences of my life. I learned that every animal has his or her story, fears, personality; to sum up: each one is unique. They deserved the respect of being cared for with love and compasion. Suena natural, bien hecho

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