First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a Chinese guy1 who likes football and learning English. English is my working language which make me to communication with my customer is the language I use to communicate with my clients as a quality engineer and helps me understand better in my enjoyment of soccer.   and also make me to enjoy Euro football.

Read http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm for the proper indentation of punctuation spacing. 

1.  You have real picture of a man and so is your English name.  Such introductions make your writing as if you are on a matchmaking website.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a Chinese guy who likes football and learning English . English is my working language which make helps me to communication with my customer as a quality engineer and also make helps me to enjoy Euro football .

Your english is very good :)