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我住在智利的多雨城市瓦爾的維亞(Valdivia)。這裡現在是冬季,降雨量不但非常豐沛,而且又多集中在夜間,我經常因為這淅瀝淅瀝 (霎霎、潺潺、澌澌) 的雨聲而難以入眠。今天白天雨勢滂沱,盼望今晚能緩和些、安靜些。要用中文完整表達還有點困難,尚請不吝斧正。
今天是雨天
今天,地面上有大量雨水。我住在瓦尔迪维亚(Valdivia), 。这是智利多雨的城市。如今,在冬天下了很多雨。在夜间,不能睡不好觉。我希望今晚是平静。
而学习中国的语言文是有点困难。请更正我的文字。I can teach spanish too。
今天是雨天(if u want to express:it rains today,you can also write:今天下雨了)
今天,有大量雨水。 降雨量很大。(u express 有大量降水 it's ok,we can understand,but it's not very good.)
我住在瓦尔迪维亚(Valdivia), (我住在,u can also express:我生活在)
这是智利多雨的城市(if u want the listener can understand u clearly, u'd better write: 在智利,这属于多雨的城市。 or 在智利,它是一个降雨量充沛的城市。 “充沛”means many and always rain.)
如今,在冬天下雨了很多在夜间,不能睡不好觉。(in chinese ,you'd better express in this way: 如今,即使是冬天,夜间依然有大量降水。因此我总是睡不好。 “即使,依然”means "although...")
我希望今晚是平静。 (u'd better express: 我希望度过一个平静的夜晚。)
而中国的语言是有点困难。请更正我的文字。(中国的语言,u can express:中文 “请更正我的文字” u can write:请帮我修改下。 )
can u teach me germany? ^ ^..right now i learn germany and korean.
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