Formal letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I´m a college student who rent a shared room in one of your properties and I´m writing this letter to inform you that I would really like to find another accommodation. As I´m sharing the room with someone else, I find very difficult to study as we only have one desk for both and it is not very spacious either. The room itself it´s pretty small and as there is only one wardrobe that we have to share, we don´t really have space enough for our clothes. Moreover, I would like to add that the heat doesn´t work properly, which is an inconvenient to focus on my studies.
However, the location is perfect, very close to college and there are many shops around. For that reason, I would really like to find another accommodation in the same area if possible.
As from now on I could afford to rent a bedroom for myself, even if the price increases, I would really like to receive an email with single bedrooms that are currently being rent.
Yours faithfully,
Andrea
(This is an exercise for the IELTS exam) Thanks in advance for your corrections :)
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Formal letter
Dear Sir or Madam,I´m a college student who is renting a shared room in one of your properties. and I´m writing this letter to inform you that I would really like to find another accommodation. As I´m sharing the room with someone else, With my current accommodation, I find it very difficult to study as we only have one desk for both and it is not very spacious either. The room itself it´s is pretty small, and as there is only one closet wardrobe that we have to share, which doesn't we don´t really have enough space enough for our clothes. Moreover, I would like to add that the heat doesn´t work properly, which is an inconveniencet to when trying to focus on my studies.
However, I like the location is perfect, , which is very close to college and there are many shops around. For that reason, I would really like to find another accommodation in the same area, if possible.
Even if the prices increases, I can now As from now on I could afford to rent a bedroom for myself, even if the price increases
I would really like to receive an email with single bedrooms that are currently available to being rent.
Yours faithfully,
Andrea
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Formal letter
Dear Sir or Madam,I´m a college student who is renting a shared room in one of your properties, and I´m writing this letter to inform you that I would really like to find another accommodation. As I´m sharing the room with someone else, I find it very difficult to study as we only have one desk for both and it is not very spacious either. The room itself it´s is pretty small and as there is only one wardrobe that we have to share, we don´t really have enough space enough for our clothes. Moreover, I would like to add that the heat doesn´t work properly, which is an inconvenient inconvenience to when focusing on my studies.
However, the location is perfect, very close to college campus and there are many shops around. For that reason, I would really like to find another accommodation in the same area if possible.
As from now on I could afford to rent a bedroom for myself, even if the price increases. I would really like to receive an email with single bedrooms that are currently being available for rent.
Yours faithfully,
Andrea
(This is an exercise for the IELTS exam) Thanks in advance for your corrections :)
¡Muy bien, Andrea! Si tienes preguntas, dime por favor.
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