Bagan, we called it is known as the  "Heart of Myanmar".  There are  have over 2000 ancient pagodas. Some pagodas are damaged by earthquakes. Bagan is a small ancient town. Viewing sunsets and sunrises on the top of the temples is one of the famous most gratifying things to do in Bagan. A more modern way to view Seeing the sunrise while riding the is by hot-air balloons is things to do in Bagan. There are also other ancient architectures. People in Bagan are friendly and helpful. There are lots of many Burmese restaurants if you want to try  would like to sample Burmese cuisinefoods. Most of people from other countries Many foreigners come to Myanmar is because of Bagan. Weather in Bagan is a little bit hot. In Bagan, There is an ancient tower made with ancient architecture. If you go there, you can see that offers spectacular the beautiful views of the area. However, As Bagan is a  place of national heritage, place in Myanmar and all Burmese people value cherish it greatly.

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A National Heritage Place in Myanmar
Myanmar is a country located in southeast Asia and was formerly known as Burma.  Buddhism is the religion of most people in Myanmar.  So when you come to Myanmar, you will see [or you can expect to see] lots of pagodas and temples. In Myanmar, there are lots of national heritage places, too.  Bagan is one of the most famous national heritage places in Myanmar.  We call Bagan the "Heart of Myanmar."  It has over 2,000 ancient pagodas, although some pagodas have been damaged by earthquakes.  Bagan is a small, ancient town. Viewing the sunset or sunrise from the top of a temple is one of the well-known things to do in Bagan. Seeing the sunrise while riding in a hot-air balloon is something else to do in Bagan. There is also ancient architecture. People in Bagan are friendly and helpful. There are lots of Burmese restaurants if you want to try Burmese foods. Most visitors from other countries come to Myanmar to see Bagan. The weather in Bagan is a bit hot. In Bagan, there is a tower made with ancient architecture [or:  that dates from the xx century]. If you visit, you will have a beautiful view. Bagan is a national heritage place in Myanmar, and all Burmese people treasure it.