My friend is traveling in Portugal
My friend is traveling in Portugal, he has visited some cities. He sent me a lot of photos this beautiful country. It inspires me. His travelling. But now he is seeing this country alone. And I think that not good way for him. He likes to share his opinion, his feelings. It's difficult to organize friends with their families choose dates and travelling often together.
We're from Russia. (Can I say a sentence with the structure "either me": He is from Russia either me ?) We are living in different countries now. I'm visiting my friend in Ukraine, he's living in Amstardam. I hope we can met each other next spring and bicycle around Amstardam.
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My friend is traveling in Portugal
My friend is traveling in Portugal, he has visited some cities. He sent me a lot of photos of this beautiful country. It inspires me. His travelling.(Sentence fragment. Do you mean "his travelling" inspires you? Or maybe, "He's travelling.")) But (Avoid using conjunctions(but, and, or, etc.) to start sentences) now he is seeing this country alone. And I think that is not good way for him to travel. He likes to share his opinion and his feelings. It's difficult to organize friends with their families choose dates and travelling often together. (This sentence is confusing. Try breaking it up into two simple sentences then combine them.)We're from Russia. (Can I say a sentence with the structure "either me": He is from Russia either me ?)("either" means that only one of you are from Russia. "We're from Russia" works well. Another way to say it: "Both of us are from Russia.") We are living in different countries now. I'm visiting my friend in Ukraine and, he's living in Amsterdam. I hope we can met each other next spring and bicycle around Amsterdam.
Interesting entry about travel. Your sentences are concise and to the point, which is good! Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.
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