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My second report. Edward can use a few basic phrases. He has been able to introduce himself and he can also answer questions about personal details such as where he lives, where he works and what he does but he is not fluent. It's hard for him to interact since his use of grammar structures is extremely limited as he has only used simple present structures during the interview and his vocabulary is very limited as well. He has been able to understand around 50% of the listened words but it's still insufficient for satisfactory interaction. He must improve his knowledge of grammar as well as his speaking and listening skills. Laura can use a number of words and phrases. She is able to answer questions and give several details but she still makes a considerable number of mistakes. She can interact well and she has been able to answer clearly and fluently, however, a lack of grammar skills is noticeable. Laura can understand around 50% of the listened words but it's still insufficient for satisfactory interaction. She must work on her knowledge of grammar as well as her speaking and listening skills in order to complement her fluency.

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My second report.

Edward can use(Suggestion: knows) a few basic phrases. He has been able to introduce himself and, he can also answer questions about personal details such as where he lives, where he works and what he does. butHowever, he is not fluent. It's hard for him to interact since his use of grammatical structures is extremely limited as he has only used simple present structures(If you mean "tenses" when you say "structures" then  us that.  "Structures" is vague.) during the interview and his vocabulary is very limited as well.
He has been able to understand around 50% of the listened-to words but, it's still insufficient for satisfactory interaction.
He must improve his knowledge of grammar as well as his speaking and listening skills.


Laura can use a number of words and phrases. She is able to answer questions and give several details but, she still makes a considerable number of mistakes. She can interact well and she has been able to answer clearly and fluently, however, a lack of grammatical skills is noticeable.
Laura can understand around 50% of the listened words but it's still insufficient for satisfactory interaction.
She must work on her knowledge of grammar as well as her speaking and listening skills in order to complement her fluency.
(This sentence is very similar to the one above about Edward.  It almost looks copied and pasted.)

Your grammar is strong and your tone is very formal here.  Remember to use "," when necessary.  If it is a compound sentence with two clauses then a "," after "and" or "but" is necessary.  Let me know if you have any questions about the corrections or suggestions.  Most of them were not based on technical errors but suggestions to make you sound more fluent.

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