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Moon Festival 2018 24 September 2018 was Chinese traditional Moon Festival, the day I went to barbecue with my family. Because my cousin brother told me, he didn't a barbecue for a long time. Ironically when we decide to activity he did barbecue with his colleagues in a few days before.

However, "it doesn’t matter" I thought, because family and colleague've been different. I’ve liked to play with my cousin brother, when we were in primary schools whose spend a lot of time together. This family’ gathering brought me back some of those special moments.

A moon of the nigh was the brightest and roundest just like my family.

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Moon Festival 2018

The 24th of September was the traditional Chinese Moon Festival. That day I went to a barbecue with my family. My cousin told me that he didn't have a barbecue for a long time. Ironically, he did have a barbecue with his colleagues just a few days before.

However, "It doesn’t matter" I thought, because family and colleagues are two different things. I liked to play with my cousin, when we were in primary school. We used to spend a lot of time together. This family gathering brought me back some good memories.

The moon that night was the brightest and the roundest just like my family.

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Moon Festival 2018

The 24th of September, 2018, was the Chinese traditional Moon Festival, the day I went to a barbecue with my family because my cousin's brother* told me he didn't have a barbecue for a long time. Ironically, when we decide to attend the activity he did a barbecue with his colleagues a few days before.

However, "It doesn’t matter" I thought, because family and colleagues would have been different. I’ve liked to play with my cousin's brother. When we were in primary schools we would spend a lot of time together. This family gathering brought me back some of those special moments.

The moon of that night was the brightest and roundest, just like my family.

[* Your cousin's brother is still your cousin, or your half-cousin if not from the same two  as your direct cousin.]

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