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It’s never too late There are some people that have to make some important decisions in spite of being too young as, for instance, deciding on subjects to study for their future careers. On the contrary, others aren't even able to do it because of their economic and social situation. They have little choice but to start walking over their path and to accept that their starting point is not the best in the world. And so, those unconscious decision-making or those imposed resignations, in such a complicated world, finally design our lives. But, what happen when many years later you realize that something doesn’t work, that you don't like the final design? Should you continue sailing toward wherever the waves want to take you? I think that it’s never too late to trigger a change of life. We have to make an effort in order to achieve our goals, to be wherever we want and become the owners of our life and designers of our own destiny.

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It’s never too late

There are some people that have (or who have) to make some important decisions in spite of being too young such as, for instance, deciding on which subjects to study for their future careers. On the contrary, others aren't even able to do it because of (or due to) their economic and social situation. They have little choice but to start walking over along (or down) their path and to accept that their starting point is not the best in the world. And so, those that unconscious decision-making or those imposed resignations, in such a complicated world, finally design our lives.
But, what happens when many years later you realize that something doesn’t work, that you don't like the final design? Should you continue sailing toward wherever the waves want to take you?
I think that it’s never too late to trigger a change of life. We have to make an effort in order to achieve our goals, to be wherever we want and become the owners of our life lives and designers of our own destiny destinies.


Very good Susana. A couple of minor corrections in red and some suggestions to sound more natural in blue.

In the last sentence, it's better to use the plural forms as you're referring to "our", which is also plural.

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It’s never too late

There are some people that have to make some important decisions in spite of being too young.  Such as, for instance, deciding on subjects to study for their future careers. On the contrary (I think it would be better to start this sentence with "On the other hand" or "In comparison".  "On the contrary" is used more to negate your previous point - you are not negating it here, you are just describing a different condition), others aren't even able to do it because of their economic and social situation. They have little choice but to start walking over down their path and to accept that their starting point is not the best in the world. And so, those unconscious decision-making decisions or those imposed resignations, in such a complicated world, finally design our lives.
But, what happens when many years later you realize that something doesn’t work, that you don't like the final design? Should you continue sailing toward wherever the waves want to take you?
I think that it’s never too late to trigger a change of life. We have to make an effort in order to achieve our goals, to be wherever we want and become the owners of our life and designers of our own destiny.

Muy bien Susana.  Solo correcciones menores.

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