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Rental mop I have been renting a mop to clean my house. It is very useful not only for floor, but also for walls, ceiling and shelves and so on. I also clean with it windows, porch and veranda. Would you please check my writing? Thank you.

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Rental mop

I have been renting a mop to clean my house.
It is very useful not only for the floor, but also for the walls, ceiling, and shelves, and so on.
I also clean with it  the windows, porch, and veranda with it.

Would you please check my writing? Thank you.


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Rental mop

I have been renting a mop to clean my house.
It is very useful not only for the floor, but also for the walls, ceiling, and shelves and so on etc
I also clean with it the windows, the porch and the veranda with it.

Would you please check my writing? Thank you.
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Rental mop

I have been renting a mop to clean my house.
It is very useful not only for the floors, but also for walls, ceilings and shelves and so on.

(generally it is recommended to only use "and" once in a sentence - even in the case of the phrase "and so on". If you're listing multiple items, use commas for all of them until the final item. so in this case i would suggest: "...but also for walls, ceilings, shelves and so on.")

I also clean with it windows, porch and veranda.
(i would recommend either: "i also clean the windows, porch and veranda with it" or "I also use it to clean the windows, porch and veranda") 
Would you please check my writing? Thank you.

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Yeah, it is a mop, but not normal. It's a special one of a Japanese famous cleaning company.
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Is this item really a "mop"? A mop is usually a relatively inexpensive item, so you would simply buy one instead of renting it.

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