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My daily life these days After I graduated from my university, I tried many things and felt frustrated countless times. Sometimes, I went above and beyond my ability, and sometimes I assumed roles of what I wasn't matched with. This year, I reflected myself to be well aware of my talent, interest, value, and so on. The process in which I heard my inner voice made me respect myself and led a more mature life. For example, I finally had insight to find a job which arouses my motivation and passion. Thus, I am happier than ever as of now while working for my personal development as well as the company. From Monday of this week, I have carried out some translation work from Korean to English and a review of documents about export and import process, customs glossary, etc. I found myself to be engrossed in translating spoken and written languages because of its creative and professional traits. Looking ahead, I'm going to acquire more certificates to prove my English and Chinese abilities, then learn again Japanese or Russian which I studied in the past. On October 13th, I'm scheduled to go on a business trip to Ghana. Since I came back to Korea from China in April last year, I've had no chance to go overseas. Being grateful for the opportunity, I'll devote myself to translation work and go the extra mile to attain goals of the organization.

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My Daily Life These Days

After I graduated from my university, I tried to do many occupations, yet, often found myself frustrated countless times. Sometimes, I had taken a position that was simply above and beyond my ability, and sometimes, I had assumed jobs that didn’t match up well with my character. As a result, earlier this year, I deeply reflected upon what my talents are, where my interests lie, and how my personal values could then be met and satisfied.

Undergoing that process, one in which I discovered, heard, and listened to my inner voice, allowed me to both respect myself more and to lead a more fulfilled life since then. Afterward, I finally had an insight to seek a job which arouses my motivation and passion, and eventually, I found it. Thus, I am happier now than ever before, so not only will I continue to work towards my personal development, but also to improve the development of the company which employs me.

As of this past Monday, I have been performing some translation work from Korean into English, and also reviewing documents about the export and import process, customs glossary, etc. I found myself to be easily engrossed in translating spoken and written languages because of the creative and intellectual skills it requires. Looking ahead, I'm going to acquire more certificates to prove my ability in the English and Chinese languages, but also study both Japanese and Russian as I did in the past.

On October 13th, I'm scheduled to go on a business trip to Ghana which makes me excited. I've had no chance to go overseas after returning to Korea, in April of last year, from China. Being grateful for such an opportunity, I'll devote myself to translation work and also go the extra mile to attain the goals of my organization.*

Hi Annette. Great job! Whatever changes that I’ve made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, for clarity, and for ease of reading. I hope that this helps you. J.

*Sincerest apologies if I’ve misinterpreted your thoughts!

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