Could you please check my writing?
I took an English lesson in a language school today.
Nowadays, I was thinking about my English, how can I improve it and what should I do.
I asked me why do I want to learn English, what for.
I like traveling and especially watching sports.
I want to understand what they say on Interviews in English.
Could you please check my writing? Thank you.
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Could you please check my writing?
I took an English lesson in (at) a language school today.Nowadays, I was (have been) thinking about my English, how can I improve it and what should I do.
(it might sound more natural to say "These days I have been thinking about my English; how I can improve it and what i should do." - 'I can' vs. 'can I' and 'what should i do' vs. 'what i should do')
I asked me myself why do I want to learn English, what for.
I like traveling and especially watching sports.
(generally you would use especially in this sentence structure when emphasising a subcategory - e.g. "I like sports, especially tennis." - but because sports is not a subcategory of travelling, it sounds a bit strange.)
I want to understand what they say on (in) interviews in English.
Could you please check my writing? Thank you.
Great job as always, Kaori! :-)
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I took an English lesson in a language school today. Nowadays, I am thinking about my English, how I can improve it and what I should do. I asked myself why I want to learn English, what for. I like traveling and especially watching sports. I want to understand what they say in (or during) Interviews in English. Could you please check my writing? Thank you.
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