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Four Of Us We went to my elder sister's wedding last Sunday. After the wedding, my grandparents wanted my little sister and I to go back to their home, they wanted us to stay with them for a few days, because my sister and I are in summer vacation. After dinner, my grandpa took out his camera, he wanted to take photos for us. My grandpa has a lot of hobbies, such as fishing, drawing traditional Chinese paintings, of course taking photos is one of them. I wore my grandma's hat and dress for fun. Look at the photos, all those three hats are my grandma's. Haha......look at my little sister, don't you think that you can hear her laughing? We were very happy! In the meanwhile I thought a lot. My grandparents are getting old, they don't ask anything from us just like before. But I know, they want us to come home often, to take some time to stay with them, even though we all go back home every weekend. I love them, I wish them a happy old age!

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The Four Of Us

We went 1 to my elder sister's wedding last Sunday. After the wedding, my grandparents wanted my little sister and I to go back to their home, they wanted us to stay with them for a few days, because my sister and I are in of our summer vacation.

After dinner, my grandpa took out his camera, he wanted to take photos for of us. My grandpa has a lot of hobbies, such as fishing, drawing traditional Chinese paintings and of course taking photos - photography is one of them. I wore my grandma's hat and dress for fun. Look at the photos,2 All those three hats in the photos are my grandma's. Haha......look at my little sister2, don't you think that Can you hear the laughter of my little sister?you can hear her laughing?

We were very happy! In the meanwhile I thought was thinking a lot. My grandparents are getting old.  They don't ask anything much from us just like before. But I know, they wanted us to come home stay often; to take spend some more time to stay with them even though we all go back home see them every weekend.

I love them, I wish them a long and happy old age!




1.  You can also say, "We attended my elder sister's wedding..."

2.  You are not writing a manual, no need to use such phrases.

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@Aubépine : Thank you, my dear friend! My sister is in middle school, she told me that she was very happy with me! ha.....
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@Jone: 哈哈,看来我奶奶还是个时髦的老太太!:)
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@Ann-Mary: Thank you, Ann. ^^
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sound great !! I love spending time with my grand-mom and grand-dad they are wise and amazing people .. you and your sister look quite beautiful Anna =) .

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