Shame
I remember the precise moment, sitting behind the piano, putting off my fleece pants in the half way, looking back at other students in kindergarten who were looking directly at me. I felt an overwhelming shame and I blushed scarlet. New students kept assembling. I lost my face in front of more and more people. I couldn’t find a crack in the ground to hide myself, however, the only thing I could do is to suffer, to endure such a shame. The source of that shame is that my mother clothed me like a ball even in warm spring. Other students all dressed one piece of pants, but I dressed one layer of underclothes, one layer of fleece pants, and one layer of pants outside. My mother was afraid that I got a cold. What a ridiculous reason!If it was in an overcast day, maybe I could persuade myself not to put off my fleece pants, but it was a sunny day. When I saw the sun rise, I looked at my pants nearly in desperation. I felt so hot and glanced at the piano at the corner of my classroom by accident. God gave me courage to approach the piano, but he didn’t bless me all the time. I didn’t know how I was found out by other students. Don’ t want to wear fleece pants any more.
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Shame
I remember the precise moment, sitting behind the piano, putting pulling off my fleece pants in the half way, looking back at the other students in kindergarten who were looking directly at me. I felt an overwhelming sense of shame and I blushed scarlet. New More (?) students kept coming in assembling. I lost my face in front of more and more people. I couldn’t find a crack hole (?) in the ground in which to hide myself and however the only thing I could do was is to suffer, to endure such a shame. The source of that shame is was that my mother clothed me like a ball (maybe: "bundled me up"), even in the warm spring. Other students all wore just one layer dressed one piece of pants, but I was dressed in one set layer of underclothes, one pair layer of fleece pants, and one pair of regular pants. layer of pants outside. My mother was afraid that I would get got a cold. What a ridiculous reason!If it had been was in an overcast day, maybe I could have persuaded myself not to take put off my fleece pants, but it was a sunny day. When I saw the sun shine rise, I looked at my pants nearly in desperation. I felt so hot, and then just noticed and glanced at the piano at in the corner of my classroom. by accident God gave me courage to approach the piano, but he didn’t bless me all the time further. I didn’t don't know how I was found out by the other students. Don’ t want to wear fleece pants any more. I have never wanted to wear fleece pants since.真可爱的故事! 我觉得所有的中国的妈妈是这样!我的妈妈(也是中国人)也让过我穿太多衣服而且我在夏威夷长大的!
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Good descriptions. So you took off your fleece pants while you were sitting at the piano. The fourth and third last line must precede the event in the first line, I guess. You saw the piano in the corner by accident. Then you walked over to it in order to play, and then you took your fleece pants off while the other students watched. Is this a correct understanding of the order of events? As I read it the first time, I envisioned you went into the hallway to take off your pants, but 'in the half way' I infer you mean in the middle of your playing? I like the way you describe your feelings. Very good.
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