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If I were the richest man in the world... If I were the richest man in the world, I would like to have an amazing life. I would like to have a private tutor that he or she was good at a lot of languages then I could have the lesson whenever I wanted. I would be invited to attend to some brands events, and have a talk with somebodies. I would take my mom to different countries to travel every month. We would move from countries to countries every year to experience different cultures but we always came back to Taiwan in every Chinese New Year to have a reunion dinner with my grandma. But what I want to do most if I were the richest man is to help the world. I would hire lots of English teachers to go to those remote places where families can't support their children to learn English because I think English is the most important language in the world. I would visit some places that are poor and find out what they need most in present. I would try hard to reach out immediately to disaster areas. I would not distribute all my property though it might solve the wealth inequality problem in all over the world because I'm not that generous. All in all, if I were the richest man in the world.

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If I were the richest man in the world...

If I were the richest man person*1 in the world, I would like to have an amazing life. I would like to have a private tutor that he or she who was good at a lot of languages. Then I could have the lesson whenever I wanted. I would be invited to attend to some brands events, and have a talk with somebodies. I would take my mom to different countries to travel every month. We would move from countries country to countries countryevery year to experience different cultures but we would always came come back to Taiwan in every Chinese New Year to have a reunion dinner with my grandma.
But what I want to do most if I were the richest person*1 man is to help the world. I would hire lots of English teachers to go to those remote places where families can't support their children to learn English because I think English is the most important language in the world. I would visit some places that are poor and find out what they need most in at present. I would try hard to reach out immediately to disaster areas.
I would not distribute all my property though it might solve the wealth inequality problem in all over the world because I'm not that generous. All in all *2, if I were the richest man in the world. * 2

1* it seems from your profile you are a girl, so 'man' isn't correct. In more modern English (since the 1960's) 'man' is less used to talk about all people ie both sexes, and other alternatives are preferred.Although it looks like this is question you were given.

2* All in all - should be followed by a conclusion . eg all in all I would do somethings for myself and some for all of humanity.

Very well and clearly explained. Communicates well the ideas.



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I think that you will be a rich man now if you want to help others to learn your language or you can become a partner of me. :)
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I think that you will be a rich man now if you want to help others to learn your language or you can become a partner of me. :)
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I think that you will be a rich man now if you want to help others to learn your language or you can become a partner of me.

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