Formal Letter - Renting Your flat

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing with regard to your email about renting my flat on holiday. I am grateful 1 to tell you about such a the beautiful area where I live called, "Montaña Palentina."

As Since you are so interested, I would recommend you visit some monuments like "Casa Grande" or "El Minero" in Guardo and "La Reana" in Velilla del Rio Carrion where the flat is located the flat. Spain is famous for its gastronomy, so in any restaurant you can eat great food—for instance, paella or chicken and pork which is so typical in this country. Some of my favourite restaurants are "La Casa de la Abuela" in Cardaño or "El Portalon" in Velilla del Rio Carrion.

In addition, summer when is the best moment time 2 to come and visit our province. Moreover, 3 In order to discover the full area it is better to rent a car and create take long trips to visit different towns. You could be able to can rent a car in any car workshop. 4 However, taking the a bike to ride around the area is also a great idea due to the weather and the beauty of the place.

I hope my recommendations will be helpful. I have attached a copy of a map outlining some interesting places.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Notes:

1 While "grateful" isn't grammatically wrong, I think "I am happy to tell you" is more the sentiment you are looking for here.

2 Or even "time of year"

3 "Moreover" is grammatically correct, but since you just used "In addition" it felt cumbersome to have it here.

4 I'm not sure what a "car workshop" is. Do you mean "car rental agency"?