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diary 3#Grandpa's Okras Today my dinner had okras. But it is not just ordinary okras.It had been stored in the freezer for A WHOLE YEAR! It's unbelievable, but it's true. The okras was from my grandpa.He planted it all by himself.It grew fast and grandpa stocked it in freezer and forgot it. For the reason that not wasting food,my mom cooked it. The flavor of the one-years-old vegetables are complex to explain,it's hoary,aged,and tough,with historical smell. After the dinner, I though that the old okras day was over.Mom said: Congratulation, we have eaten half bag of the okras! Okras, see you.TT

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Diary Entry Number 3: Grandpa's Okras

Today my dinner had okras. Today for dinner we had okra. But it is not just ordinary okras. But it wasn't just ordinary okra; it had been stored in the freezer for A WHOLE YEAR! It's unbelievable, but it's true. The okras was from my grandpa. He planted it all by himself. It grew fast and grandpa stored it in the freezer and forgot it. For the reason that not wasting food, Because she did not want to waste food, my mom cooked it. 


The flavor of the one-years-old vegetables are complex to explain: it's hoary, aged, and tough, with a historical smell.*

After the dinner, I thought that the old okras days were over. Mom said, "Congratulation, we have eaten half the bag of the okras!

Okras, see you later! TT


Remember to put a space after commas and periods. 

* You will often see "an" instead of "a" before the word "history" or "historical."

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Okra is not a very commonly eaten vegetable in China, dui ba? Is it more common in Taiwan? I knew several Chinese who had never eaten it. You should get your Mom to bread it and deep-fry it, like they do in the southern US.
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"Okra" almost never appears in the plural.

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