First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I was born in China at 1976. Now I am working in Beijing office of a Silicon Valley company. My company's solution business is related to Telecom industry and major customers are telephone carriers and OEMs. My job tile is sales manager. In my spare time, I spend my time with my favorable things are favourite hobbies - music and sports.

I've learned English For more than 15 years I have been learning English.  Like most Mainland Chinese, as you may know, just like other Chinese, my English is very poor. The reason I want to in wanting to learn English, for now, is that I am planing to go for a postgraduate education of in USA.  This is why I need So I have to improve my English as soon as possible. Although I know that I am too old to learn and maybe this may be is my last chance to implement fulfill my dream. So I will try I must try my best.

No one is too old to learn anything.  Your English is quite good.  As a matter of fact much better than most of your countrymen's.  At least you have the mechanics of the language down to a pat and neither do I see spelling mistakes.  Yes, for sure there are some rough edges needed polishing but overall, I see no serious mistake.  All your sentences are clear and easy to understand.  You are much too hard on yourself.

Adam

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I was born in China at 1976. Now I am working in the Beijing office of a Silicon Valley company. My company's solution is related to the telecom industry and its major customers are carriers and OEMs. My job title is a sales manager. In my spare time, my favorite hobbies things are music and sports.

I've learned English for more than 15 years, but as you may know, just like other Chinese, my English is very poor. The reason I want to learn English for now is because I am planning to go for a to have a postgraduate education in of USA, and thus so I have to improve my English as soon as possible. Although I know I am too old to learn and maybe this is may be my last chance to implement fulfil my dream, I will try my best.

Adam