[Jinhee] My Goal

Today's homework is about my goal in trying to learn with simple future verbs, compound and complex sentences. Please view this and help me :)

I am an university student who is majoring1 in math.  I'm am going to be a math teacher whom all students will like. I'm am going to work in a school and  I'm am going to teach students to improve their garner greater interest in math. After I graduate graduating from university, I am going to go to a grad achool of to specialize in Education. While I study, At the same time, I'm going to practice teaching by doing by becoming a private tutor. lesson. Then, This way I will know learn how to be a good teacher treat students. Next, I'm going to get a teacher's license and I'm going to get a job as before becoming one a teacher. Finally, I'm going to I will be a kind, respectful and compectent competent teacher. It is important for me to achieve this goal because it as teaching will makes me happy.

A very noble and caring profession.  人之患,在好為人師. :)

1.   You are still in the process of studying.  Hence present continuous tense.

[Jinhee] My Goal

Today's homework is about my goal with simple future verbs, compound and complex sentences. Please view this and help me :)

I am an a university student who whose major in is math, and i'm going to be a math teacher who all students like. I'm going to work in a school. I'm going to teach students to improve their interest in math. After I graduate university, I am going to go to a grad achool school of education. While I study, I'm going to practice teaching by doing giving private lessons. Then, I will know how to treat students. Next, I'm going to get a teacher's license, and I'm going to get a job as a teacher. Finally, I'm going to be a kind, respectful and compectent competent teacher. It is important for me to achieve this goal because it will make me happy.