Shopping Day

I went shopping yesterday with my friend yesterday. Our city is very small.  So there are a few of shops. "When a thing is rare, it becomes precious." There is very low Not much discount on the clothes and shoes. I didn't want to buy them. At last, I only bought a small bow1 back home. It is green and full of very artistic looking.

I prefer to buy things on the internet. It is convenient to pick up what I want. There are is a large amount of commodities which are lucid 2 clearly listed in the price and so I can choose the cheaper one. I don't need to go outside and I will receive the commodities at get out of my home for the goods will arrive at my doorstep.

What's more is the after-sale services are more and more getting better now. I don't need to worry about what should I do when they did not meet my expecation. if the things are not good enough when I receive them. I could simply just ask for an exchange a purchase! So great! I like to buying things on the internet.


1.  Do you mean a bowl (碗) or a bow (蝴蝶結)?

2.  lucid is 明晰 or expressed clearly; easy to understand: "a clear and lucid style". Showing ability to think clearly, esp. in the intervals between periods of confusion or insanity.

Shopping Day

I went shopping with my friend yesterday. Our city is very small, so there are very few shops. "When a thing is rare, it becomes precious." There weren't many discounts on the clothing and shoes; thus, I didn't want to buy them. finally, I only bought a small bow home. It is green and very artistic.
I prefer to buy things on the internet. It is convenient picking what I want. There are a large amount of goodies which are cheaply priced. I can easily choose the cheaper one. I don't need to go outside and my purchases will be delivered.
In addition, the post-sale services are much better now. I don't need to worry about what to do if the things are not good enough when I receive them; I can just exchange or return a purchase! So awesome! I like buying things on the internet.

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removed certain colloqialisms that are never used, such as 'what's more' and 'commodities'. Do not know what a 'bow' is in terms of clothing is though. Assuming it is a type of dress?