Five Secrets

One day, there was a friend told me about five secrets which I find very useful..These are very useful for me.

1:  The first secret is "To be true to yourself ".  No mater who am I , what things I have done, something did - whether it is good or bad, what I should do is receping myself. I have to accept them.

2.   The second secret is "Leave no regress Have no regrets" . Making your dream true and never forgive Never regret how you achieve you dreams. 1

3.   The third secret is "become love"Be loving". We should watch the world with lovefull glasses See the world through love tinted glasses and view it from an angle of love. Do everything from the view of love.

4.   the fouth secret is "Live for the moment ".  We Never know what will happen tomorrow, so cherish the present.  we should live the moment . What we can do something is "today " >

5.   The last one is "give more than you take ". "It's better to give than to take"  As we was born to grow up, there are many thing helping us . Thre are many who helped us as we were growing up.  Now it's time to give something back to the world . Make the world more beautiful and a nicer place!

 
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1.  You really need to write this in Chinese if you want an accurate correction.  What you stated and what you gave as example do not match.  你所說的與你給的例子不配合.  So I am guessing here.

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five secrets

One day, there was a friend who told me about five secrets. These are very useful for me. 

The first secret is to "be true to yourself." No mater who am I I am, or what things I have done - something (you don't have to say "thing/something" twice) good or bad - what I should do is receping accept myself. 

The second secret is "leave have no regress regrets." Make your dreams come true and never forgive look back.

The third secret is "become love be loving." We should watch the world with lovefull glasses. Do everything from the view of lovea loving mind.

The fouth secret is "live in the moment." We never know what will happen tomorrow, so we should live in the moment. What we can do something is talk about "today." 

The last one is "give more than you can take." As we was were born to grow up, there are many things helping us. Now, it's time to give something back to the world. Make the world more beautiful and nice.
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Very good writing! Just watch out for your grammar.

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