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Short Essay 1 Yesterday, I was looking out of my window, and I noticed a strange object moving in the woods. At first, I thought that it was an animal searching for food, but soon I realized that it didn't look like any familiar animals that I knew. It appeared to be a small black sphere with a long tail. However, I couldn't see its head. Neither could I see any signs of arms nor legs. Curiously, I put on my shoes and went outside to have a look. As soon as I stepped outside, the strange animal noticed my presence and moved farther into the woods. After several fruitless attempts to catch it, I stopped chasing, and instead, I tried to stand still to see if it would come close to me. I waited for a few minutes, and as I was preparing to give up and call it a day, a soft breeze carried the strange animal towards me. It didn't take me long to realize that I had been wasting my time trailing a black plastic bag.

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Yesterday, I was looking out of my window, and I noticed a strange object moving in the woods. At first, I thought that it was an animal searching for food, but soon I realized that it didn't look like any familiar animals that I knew. It appeared to be a small black sphere with a long tail. However, I couldn't see its head. Neither could I see any signs of arms nor legs. Curiously, I put on my shoes and went outside to have a look. As soon as I stepped outside, the strange animal noticed my presence and moved farther into the woods. After several fruitless attempts to catch it, I stopped chasing, and instead, I tried to stand still to see if it would come close to me. I waited for a few minutes, and as I was preparing to give up and call it a day, a soft breeze carried the strange animal toward me. It didn't take me long to realize that I had been wasting my time trailing a black plastic bag.
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