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I'm begging to learn English. My name is Joao Marcello, I live in Brazil and am trying to learn English. I have short time to study because I work all week, 10 hour for day and night I came a little tired. Now I'm trying to write something, as I don't speak very well I have a lot of difficult to say you everything I thought. I hope that somebody can to read this show text and help me with that. Thanks.

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I'm begging to learn English.

My name is Joao Marcello, I live in Brazil and am trying to learn English. I only  have short time to study because I work all week, 10 hour days and at  night I am a little tired. Now I'm trying to write something, as I don't speak very well.  I have a lot of difficulty expressing myself. I hope that somebody can  read this text and help me with that. Thanks.



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I'm begging to learn English.

My name is Joao Marcello. I live in Brazil and am trying to learn English. I have only a short time to study because I work all week, 10 hour a day. At night I am a little tired. Now I'm trying to write something, as I don't speak very well . I have a lot of difficulty saying everything I think. I hope that somebody can read this text and help me with it. Thanks.
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I'm begging to learn English.

My name is Joao Marcello. I live in Brazil and I am 1 trying to learn English. I only have a little 2 time to study because I work all week, ten 3 hours day and night, so I came here 4 a little tired. Now I'm trying to write something. Since I don't speak very well, I have a lot of difficulty telling you everything I'm thinking. I hope that somebody can read this sample text and help me with that. Thanks.


Notes:

1 While using "am" alone here is technically correct, it sounds more natural (to me anyway) to include the pronoun again.

2 While the adjective "short" can be used of time, here it sounds better to use "little"

3 While numbers can be sued in texts, here it's probably best to spell out the word in full.

4 I'm not quite sure what "so I came a little tired" was getting at. I took it to mean that you came to this website tired after work. It could also be suggesting that you arrived home tired after a hard day of work. Either way it needs a bit more description to get across the intended idea.

Overall this reads quite well, and several of my suggested changes only involve what I think sounds more natural. I hope that helps!

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